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for Breaking The Mirror

by Vandervort

person Rukia Isaioi
schedule July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Like this story. plz update soon??? I wanna c the dad get what carma has coming 2 him
person uandme
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really awesome :)
more soon please!!!
person tgb1yhn
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, I notice you said you had the next 16 chapters please please please post them I can't wait to read what happens, it seems Jayden's neoghbour is up to somthing, i'm guessing undercover cop. Also I tried finding you on FictionPress but it didn't show up are you under a diffrent name there?
person Mistaken
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reallly like your story!! Its kind of bumming though b/c sometimes the chapters are soo short! But I really like where youre going with it! Keep up the good work! Update soon!
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting!
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If all authors started stories as good as you, i'd be in heaven. Jayden is a fantastic character already, and i'm excited to learn more about his new neighbor..speaking of neighbor, I almost didn't read this story because you spelt it wrong in your summary :P lol

I before E except after C...except in neighbor :D

Great story!
person Mistaken
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! update soon!
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep - updating the same day is definitely fast enough ;-))

A nice teacher... A new neighbor - hope he's not one of Al's buds!

Looking forward to further installments.
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You didn't mention age - but I think Jayden's fairly young. Clever boy to realize so early that he doesn't control the universe... (Took me a lot longer.)

I hope you'll post more.