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for The Bad Day

by Jmedea

person ???
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! IT ENDS???? This can't be! *gasp* you HAVE to write more... like you have to or i'll start sending death threats and i'm lazy and i hate writing so could you please wirte more =D... Come on you know you want to and since your story is so freaking amazing people would agree with me for sure on this fact... so write more.. or else =D
person ecstatic
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh i LOVE it. mooOOoore
person Pudding333
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just love this story so far. I really like the descriptions and how the plot progresses. The characters are also coming along nicely, not telling or showing too much or too little but just the right amount. Very nice work so far; I hope to see more soon.