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for The Bad Day

by Jmedea

person Anon
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is HOT. Please continue!
person Acal
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.. it keeps getting better and better! Yay a name! Can't wait for the next chapter
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is amazing! Can't wait to read more!!
person Acal
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was smoking! Really awesome, another steamy addition to my favourites list! You really need to give the guy a name too
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn that was gettin hot, please continue.
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was strating to get nervous, I thought you abandoned the story. This chapter was hot, I'm lookin out for the next one.
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THATS MEAN ENDING IT THERE!!!!!!!!! great story, BUT MEAN

hehe i loved it anyway
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very descriptive and direct. I love it.
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue **nods**
person Allie
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. The characters were extremely well developed, and your prose is excellent.. I will be checking back soon for more chapters!