rate_review Reviews

The story's got a pretty good premise. However I could do without all the American bashing. I like stories that aren't constantly expressing prejudices against other people just because of where they come from or who they are. It gets kind of annoying when it is repeated multiple times. Not all Americans are that stupid just like not all foreigners are that stupid. I'm pretty sure that not to many foreigners know much about America either. I know it's just a story and you have a right to express your artistic creativity but, come on!!!
...anyway, like I said, your story has a good premise and I do like it I just don't like the prejudice views of Americans expressed in the story.

Hey welcome back! I missed these two boys!

I agree w/Kamil; I don't know if I trust Roni. And what the hell is Matt and his goons doing? Stalking Niko? What creeps!

Yay! I love this story. I am so happy to see an update. I am diving in right now.

Yay! I was so happy to see this updated! I love the way Kamil and Nico's relationship is evolving. And Nico was so cute, wanting to blow off school and spend he day w/Kamil. Very nice update!

I just finished the story so far and I really like it. I'm really glad that Kamil FINALLY kicked that ass Roni out! It's about time! Jeez, to think that he can just waltz right back into Nico's life after he left him and hurt him so much? What a douche. I noticed that you started this story a year ago. I hope I don't have to wait a year for another update???????? It's a GREAT story! They both feel the same for each other, but they are both too afraid to voice their feelings. I'm looking forward to the next chapter....in the not to distant future, I hope! lol

Sorry, my bad. You started the story TWO years ago!!!!! Sorry. Please, please, please don't keep us waiting that long for another update??????????? Oh, and btw: last night I had a really weird dream that I was talking to Mel Brooks. Today I realized that was probably b/c I read about the boys renting Space Balls, which was by Mel Brooks. Weird how the brain works, right? Also, I was reading the reviews and I am a college grad, but please, could someone tell me, what is an ellipse? I definitely do not remember this term from all my English classes. Thx!

I just found this story last night and it's really good! I'm only on the 2nd chapter, but I'm hooked! It's a very interesting story. I like the fact that you incorporate both characters backgrounds and traditions into the story. Altho, I'm pretty sure Niko's obsession w/ketchup isn't from Finland! My mother (from the Bronx), was also obsessed w/ketchup; put it on EVERYTHING. Eggs, steak, SPAGHETTI (gross, right, even tho ketchup is made from tomatoes like spaghetti sauce). Anyway, so, yeah, great story! I was laughing when they were both explaining where their countries are located! OMG, people actually DON'T KNOW where Poland and Finland are? That's 4th grade geography! Anyway, I just wanted to comment on the story so far; great job!

Hmmm....I like these characters. I hate Roni, which I'm sure is to be expected. I'm also obviously on pins and needles waiting for the I live you scene. Sometimes I think there is a bit too much mindless chit chat between the characters, like when they are talking about their cultures or their favorite foods or whatever. I expect there to be some of that but it gets to be too much for me. I did especially like the last chapter, so you seem to be off to a good start with your solo writing.

that was awesome! loved it! I was wondering as to when this would be updated. and I got my wish! when will the next update be? soon I do hope!

Oh! I'm so happy that you are continuing this story. I really like it and hope that the next update won't take a year :)