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Very beautiful poem! You used lovely words in a unique way... It shows all the love and insticts that one can have and feel for the one they love.
I too, love the title. It reflects a balance, physical and emotional. Very good work!

that was just incredible and may i say EXTREMELY HOTT!!!

That was beautiful...and gritty. It was like you were warring with the tenderness and the violence of sex (hence the title). I don't know much about poetry, so I can't critique based of format or style, but I do know that this is a piece filled with emotion. You described so much using as few words as possible and left the rest to my imagination (I even made up a story in my head about the characters).

Anywho, great job. Keep writing! Your story is like birthday cake and this poem is the frosting.

That was...very good. I especially like the title.