rate_review Reviews

aww!! Way to go!! I am hooked already!! I love your characters energy here, there is just something about them that I love already. They are like... I don't know how to say it but I love them lol. I also love how you ended this first chappie, it will keep everyone wanting to know what is going to happen, especially those that hadn't read Beast's mate, you might also want to put this story up in the Vampire section, that way you get find more fans. I know sometimes people don't look in the different categories, so if you put it there, you might get more reviews!! Just a thought, I don't even know if you did that already lol but whatev. Good job! And as always I enjoy your writing style, everything runs smoothly and makes it easy to enjoy the actual story without having a hard time reading it lol (I hope you know what I mean) oh well. that's it for me, update soon!!

Well hun if the other one wasn't trying and this one is...it will be a masterpiece. I'm already excited, a new fae, talk of the other races. (which left me curious in the other story as to which ones were if any still in existantce) Ohh. I'm all jittery just waiting for the next chapter. Good luck, not that you need it.

PS. I know what you mean about charicters and their own ideas...my muses constantly disagree with me when I'm writing. Pesky little things aren't they?

That was AWESOME!! i can't wait until you post more! i loved your descriptions such a beautifully long chapter, so sprites, faires, nymps and imps all belong to the same family?

really interesting start, love Marina, keep going, but dont forget about your other story.