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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That has to be one of the most erotic scenes I've ever read! And to think that I've never considered oil wrestling a turn on! :)
The chemistry between Alexxi and Lance is powerful and thick! And Alexxi with her art of feint! I want her to give me a pointer or two! :)))
The chapter was sexy, teasing, sultry, hot and highly sensual... Every round better than the previous one! Your writing is natural, fluid and effortless... it's a style that stimulates the reader and makes it very easy to keep reading and stay hooked, leaving him wanting more!
Now, I will shut up and send you guys inspirational waves! I am SO anxiously waiting for that shower!
The chemistry between Alexxi and Lance is powerful and thick! And Alexxi with her art of feint! I want her to give me a pointer or two! :)))
The chapter was sexy, teasing, sultry, hot and highly sensual... Every round better than the previous one! Your writing is natural, fluid and effortless... it's a style that stimulates the reader and makes it very easy to keep reading and stay hooked, leaving him wanting more!
Now, I will shut up and send you guys inspirational waves! I am SO anxiously waiting for that shower!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story guys!!! You seem to work perfectly together.
I love the fact that they are both strong, sexy and stubborn characters and they know what they want from eachother. Can't wait for that long carnal night!
I wasn't much of a fan of D/S, but I'm reconsidering now... :)
Beautiful writing.
I love the fact that they are both strong, sexy and stubborn characters and they know what they want from eachother. Can't wait for that long carnal night!
I wasn't much of a fan of D/S, but I'm reconsidering now... :)
Beautiful writing.
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, second chapter was deep. A lot of mind games between them, powerful words, both of them are very strong. I liked the word play (and the foreplay) in this chapter. Good writing, you stay strong with both charactors.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was just soo F**CKIN' INCREDIBLE!!!
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, now I have no idea who I am going to root for in this story. Lance and Alexxi are both awesome characters! You're setting things up nicely with them. And despite their obvious similarities, they seem to compliment each other well.
Okay, here is where I am going to get nit picky, spelling balls with a z is driving me bonkers! If you are spelling it that way for a reason, sorry that I don't get it.
Anywho, other than that...Chapter 2 is as yummy as Chapter 1!
Can't wait for more.
HSL
Okay, here is where I am going to get nit picky, spelling balls with a z is driving me bonkers! If you are spelling it that way for a reason, sorry that I don't get it.
Anywho, other than that...Chapter 2 is as yummy as Chapter 1!
Can't wait for more.
HSL
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're off to a yummy start! I love a good "clash of the wills" story and it being a Dom/Sub story is an added bonus.
Keep the chapters coming!
HSL
Keep the chapters coming!
HSL
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a fun romp, love. But then playing with you always is.
<3 Dominique
<3 Dominique
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The previous review from Mlle. Vasser is, I suspect, highly prejudiced (if not highly priZed!)!! But, most graciously, I accept -- and ditto to her the sentiments, many-fold more!
We both encourage less prejudiced reviewers to speak to us as this long night unfolds ....... :)
We both encourage less prejudiced reviewers to speak to us as this long night unfolds ....... :)