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for Another grain

by cohe

person teeta
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe! You LOST! *skipping off to think of some challenge to you*
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely i really enjoyed it hope there more
person irinutza
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am so sorry for oliver and nila. It is a horrible experience for them both.
But as i see nila needs oliver to get through this, but oliver feels better alone...
I hope nila can convince the other that they can help each other
please update soon, it is a very interesting story :)
person kohaku
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, second chapter made me cry a little.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty powerful and evocative opening.