AFF Fiction Portal
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to seeing what happens
person shadow
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked your very very short story cuz that Amil (yah i know his name but i like to piss him off) is such a bastard! He killed her with kinky sex?

Wellz, I thought it was slash. If he used a knife or claws or whatnot sharp objects on the guy and then on the girl, I guess it was! Very edward scissorhands of you, and that is kinky, so the title didn't lie.

your writing is good, spelling, all that crap. Hey could you break up all those warnings with the space bar? It makes the whole page go sideways, err, something like that, I couldn't see em all. Is there really going to be all those? Good god, course I'll read it.

k, well, like all those other reviewers, I want to read some more, longer with other kinds of slash, too, if you wouldn't mind too much, not to tell you what to do or anything. why is it on here twice? Makes me think, what would people say if you put in on, like, ten or twenty times and filled a whole page? ::snicker:: That would be funny.

Immortals. Like. Them.