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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 cont. - Haha. Another mistake that I missed. Damn. I'm terrible. "Nothing good came ever out of a 'but'" should be: "Nothing could ever came out of a 'but'". Sorry, sorry.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn! just when it was getting exciting. please update soon *puppy dogs eyes*
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeap ~nods head with serious expression on face~ i like byron!!!
thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ~throws out virtual roses at author~
another good chapter, loved the interaction between the 'brothers'
looking forward to the next up-date!
luck!
thank you, thank you, thank you!!! ~throws out virtual roses at author~
another good chapter, loved the interaction between the 'brothers'
looking forward to the next up-date!
luck!
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - Oh my God! I LOVE this story. It's so beautiful. So, so beautiful. And original. I've never read about the not growing fangs thing. That's just really interesting. So, is Byron Julian's REAL son? Or vampire son? I assume vampire son but then why would he say that he shouldn't think of him like that? I guess I'll find out later on. Love this story!
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 - Oh my. I wonder what Marius did too Julian. I guess he raped him and then turned him into a vampire or something. If he did turn him into a vampire against his will, then why doesn't he feel upset for doing the same thing to Cade? Because it's not like Cade ASKED him to turn him into a vampire, if you know what I mean.
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 - Haha. I'd name this chapter: 'Taste'. I love, love, LOVE Byron. He's just so sweet and sexy. He and Cade are adorable together. Oh! You know, if you need a beta, feel free to email me at mavinsavvy@yahoo.com, I would really love to beta for you. Besides, there aren't that many mistakes. Your story just needs a tiny bit of tweaking here and there. Well, let me know if you want me to! And update soon!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marius was scary
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter!
hopefully byron will make more appearances ((love that name!))
looking forward to the next chapter
luck!
hopefully byron will make more appearances ((love that name!))
looking forward to the next chapter
luck!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting so far.
=^-^= the idea of a vampire who has no fangs is kinda funny.
looking forward to the next chapter.
luck!
=^-^= the idea of a vampire who has no fangs is kinda funny.
looking forward to the next chapter.
luck!
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am confused. Why does it seem Julian will be a saviour?