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for Of Clouds and Blood

by Kiba

person kiix
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Howdie! If I could draw, I would send you something. :) My drawing sucks rocks.

However I do love your story. I am very intrigued with the Marius and Julian characters. There are references to them once having a very close relationship but now it's distant and Julian actually seems terrified by his maker/master. Will you be explaining more about that soon?

Ha. Ha. You even have to go to school when your dead and are fangless.

Keep up the chapters! Eagerly awaiting more!!!

Kiix
person Finnel
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O they do safety helmets? ~goes to pinch one~ wonder if they do arm&leg guards...

lessons ah-la byron! =^-^= yeap, he does know his teaching methods! ~places an apple on the teachers table with a smile~
but i'd be hard not to learn anything from a yummy creature such as he! ~mental image of byron in a cat outfit standing next to a blackboard~((might just have to draw that!))

more lessons soon i hope?
ja!


person Finnel
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~sips happily on a hot cup of coffee ((three teaspoons of suger and lots of cream = yum!)) before passing the thermos back with a smile! Ah the perks of the low-blood-pressure club!~

poor cade-chan! but that bit with byron tripping on his trousers was brillinat! I'm like that in the morning - fall over my own feet, the cat... yeah... ((fell down the stair yesterday morning while trying to tie my knee-high doc's and holding a cup of tea... wasn't pretty...))

Awww, i want to take Christian home!!! ~throws wild-flowers from out park at the kawaii vampire!~

luck with the next chapter!
ja!

person Saminada
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great update! but I wonder what happened between Marius and Julian??
I can't wait to know their story! ^^
Plz update soon!
I can't wait to read more! *hugs*
person Finnel
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~presents the author with a single lotus flower~
Christian! ~glomps~ another flower fan!!! ~yay!!!~

Finally! some yummy Byron/Cade action!
Cade-chan must have low blood-pressure too... the way he acted towards Julian is just the same as me in the morning!
~randomly pulls out low blood-pressure club card~

luck with the next chapter!
ja!
person Finnel
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~throws virtual lilies at author~ =^-^= I love those flowers!!!
yay!!! more byron... do we smell the sweet scent of lemon in the future?
hmmm... Julian... another sibling? or something totally different???
luck with the next update!!!
person Saminada
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story's great!!! I love it!!
I want more!!! Update soon!!! Pretty plz! >_<


person kiix
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAWT

whoa...I do believe I need more chapters.

person Finnel
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You liked the flowers!!!!
((I'd try chocolates next but i'm told that virtual chocolate is packed full of numbers and not the good kind either...))
Owww poor Cade, but i think Marius is quite hot even if he is a bit evil!
More Byron would be loved!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Luck!
person Jenna T.
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 - Oh man. I missed a mistake. “What he tries to say is, that you can't sprout fangs for a while.” is suppose to be: “What he's trying to say is, that you can't sprout fangs for a while.”

Anyways, I absolutely love Marius now. That sex scene was so fucking hot. Especially, the part where Cade tries to bite him and Marius punishes him. Oh man. Too hot. And Cade is so damn adorable. Although, it feels like he's being a little too easy going lately. In the beginning, he had more spunk. Just a thought. Can't wait for the next update!