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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found this and couldn't stop reading. I love it so far, and can't wait for more to come!
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I jsut caught up with th is story and I am really enjoying it!I hoep you find time soon to continue it and I cant wait to see where you go with it.
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly LOVE this story! I'm finding myself loving slave/master type stories a lot lately. Kinda weird but neat at the same time. Update soon please!!
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story so far, I like the characters! I can't wait to read more!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story! i cant wait to see what happens when her power energes again.
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Very hot and I have to admit that I'm a sucker for stories with demons and vampires. Update soon!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I like Oselia's stubborness and quiet strength.
The only thing I see wrong with this is when you use the words "captives" as in the "slave's captives." It's a misused word. The slaves are the captives, and the people/demons holding them are the captors. Just a little mistake that can change the meaning of a sentence.
The only thing I see wrong with this is when you use the words "captives" as in the "slave's captives." It's a misused word. The slaves are the captives, and the people/demons holding them are the captors. Just a little mistake that can change the meaning of a sentence.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this story a lot. I wander what kind of demon you have her go to. Update soon please ^_^ ^_^ YOU GET TWO SMILE
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. While I can't say I love the fact that she "traded one prison for another" simply because that is too morbid for my conscious mind to admit, I love this story already.
I shall sit on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
There were also only a couple grammatical mistakes, which makes reading this so much easier.
I shall sit on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
There were also only a couple grammatical mistakes, which makes reading this so much easier.