rate_review Reviews

well, i'm glad that SOB is dead! good riddance!
ASOTA

Thanks for the new chapter. I'm a fortuneteller!:) Glad Javsky's dead the son of a bitch. The entire dinner episode was great. Poor Miljan, hope he and Tiger will be reunited in the future. Can't wate to find out how things are going to develop between Tega and James and Jesse and Michael.

Wow that was a pretty intense ch. It really was necessary to put Anton down like a rabid dog.

Great story! Finally Yasvik is DEAD. I was so afraid of what whe was goin gto do to poor Havar!

Oh wow, Yavisk is dead. When I saw how suspicious and cruel he was towards Havar in this chapter, I think I finally realized the extent of his bastardliness, and I guess there was no redemption for that. The Tiger and Miljan thing is really getting interesting now though. I hope Tiger makes it back to his father, somehow. And Jesse and Michael too! I get kind of frustrated with Jesse's approach with Michael, although I think it's good that he's not willing to go lollying around all lovey-dovey after getting married. I think he kind of deserved that slap though, and what Michael said to him afterward (that was ingenious really; "Now you can tell everyone that you were right")was deserved too...he really is very paranoid. And I think Sai really put a carrier's dilemma and best option into words when he said his bit about equality. Anyway great chapter, hope there's more soon!

OMG, OMG! I cannot believe the level of angst you got into Michael and Jesse's fighting, I felt terrible for Jesse and pretty bad for Michael - and then Yavisk flips and it's way beyond.. I'm glad Yavisk was killed. There was no redemption for him, none. And finally Havar is given a chance, although I think he will never be the same again... I wonder if Tiger really split, and when exactly. Where to? I expect what Miljan said about it being none of his business was an eye opener... Good for him, but if he runs back to his father, Miljan will find him. Don't know how I feel about that.
It's good that you really make Jesse an individual, a full character, so obviously not a pet. It keeps the story on the right side of the thin red line. Michael may not be a bad guy, but that's not enough. Sai said it, no one can be truly happy living like this. It's a horrible world you're painting.

AMAZING. Such an epic story. OMG I can't stop gushing over it. I can't wait until the next chapter!!

Your characters are so great! Hope Ortega will become better in Mexico and learn to love his husband back, I feel for James. Love Tiger an Miljan. Hope to read more about poor Havar soon, I just can't imagen in which way things could turn out well for him... (except his gruesome husbant dies and he can marry the doctor:))

love your writing, pleas update soon

awww... poor Sloane... this is getting interesting, I wonder what James wanted to say to Ortega? hmm... hope to see more soon

everything feels just so messed up right now... and everyone's leaving... poor havar as well. i wish someone would just take him away from anton and that, at least, brian was alive... update soon please!
ASOTA