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Kabi you're killing me. =( No update in forever. I keep checking back on this story. Just this one. I haven't been reading any other adultfanfiction except for this story and the one by lonely_mistress. Your story is just...amazing. Better than most published stories I've read. Keep the good work going. Hope you update soon. Love ya ;)

i will keed checking your update hoping you write soon another chapter
in spare time hope there will be many other chapter coming
thank for writing great story for us to enjoy

Poor Miljan! T.T Tiger ran away and his brother is dead (not that the psychotic bastard didn't deserve it). So is this a new beginning with Havar? Is the Doctor going to be his new hubby... or did I miss something like he was a carrier. Anyways, I hope to see another chapter soon.

OMG cliff hanger.

OMG clif hanger. I love you and i hate you at the same time. This is by far the most well writen fic i have ever read. Its awsome and i want it to never end. Plz dont let it end. I want more. Oh and plz dont tell me that tiger really is gone i really liked that couple they were sweat. But i still hope that they can all be together while being equal because though awsom this is not real love.

that was so wasome i love tigger wooohooo. plz update soon. This is getting really good, it must be so degrading to be them they proberly just want to kill themselves. Its all so institutionalized. so sad. I hope we still getsome more tigger even if he did run away. I s he comming bacl plz tell us bwahahaha. Oh and yay for the doctor and havar

WOW. I am so floored. That was a really satisfying chapter - finally found out more about Rowehouse (I'm assuming they're used for spare parts?). I'm also assuming that the whole Michael/Jesse thing was a preview of thier future together - altho I hope not, because it's just going to be miserable for both of them. I'm just not sure how to fix thier situation - because I think they both have a point. I'm also glad you killed Yavisk. The whole Miljan and Tiger thing is so intriguing! I have high hopes for them b/c so far, Miljan seems to treat him pretty well, even if he is condescending/dominating. I feel like their relationship needs a test tho before we really see if he's a good guy - and it seems like you've given him one. I really hope that the whole Mexcio thing works for Ortega b/c I love him and James and I want them to make it work b/c James clearly ADORES him!

I have resisted the temptation of reading the next chapter, and then reviewing that. What is going on with the Kitchen. Whenever we see Havar, his haven is now the kitchen, is it because of the doctor or because of the comfort of food and warmth.
Suck to be Sloane, and Clint I almost feel sorry for him but then remember he did this to Sloane.

Wow! I don't think I was able to encompass the entire thing. yAVISK IS DEAD! Am I glad? Does the adventure begin in India?
Tiger, that was brave of him. Escape. Sai, poor little Sai, a copy of Jesse who has to make trouble where there is no trouble?
You have two more chapters, I await those.

Wow! I don't think I was able to encompass the entire thing. yAVISK IS DEAD! Am I glad? Does the adventure begin in India?
Tiger, that was brave of him. Escape. Sai, poor little Sai, a copy of Jesse who has to make trouble where there is no trouble?
You have two more chapters, I await those. Finger factory.