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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I waited for this update. And it was nice and long. I laughed at the final scene.
What the hell is happening with Sai and Broussard? What is Broussard going to get? What is going to end soon? What was with the apple?
I pity Sloane so much. Nice punishment. It's good for him that he is forgiven. Maybe he will be more at peace with himself.
I don't know what to say about Jesse, and November ended.
What the hell is happening with Sai and Broussard? What is Broussard going to get? What is going to end soon? What was with the apple?
I pity Sloane so much. Nice punishment. It's good for him that he is forgiven. Maybe he will be more at peace with himself.
I don't know what to say about Jesse, and November ended.
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The final scene being the one with Tiger and Miljan
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And you know what else is funny, an apple was the fall of humanity.
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story. I've been reading it since long before I joined the site. You've created a very detailed world and history and made it plausible. You manage to make more than one POV engaging as well. Often with multi POV stories I find myself looking for one set of characters, but not with this story.
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the great update! will post something longer later, I'm very busy until friday night
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello there. Um i just wanted to let you know that i have been waiting for updates on this story for a few months now and um i might slit my throught if you dont update soon. This is a really well writen story and it has become my obsession over the last few months and well i had a story just like it in my head and now its real and you wont well me whats happening next. Really update soon, the life of a lowal fan dependds on it i need tis man.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
why can everyone else see that Michael loves Jesse-but not Jesse. Life isnt going back and he has to recognize it and deal- gah- love is blind then it hits with a two by four. Tiger well just phew- and Sloane's been forgiven. but ah treachery Sai has been set up. Very good-
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kabi - simply - I love you. =D
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah whats wrong with you, you person you when are you going to update i have been waiting for so long i want more november sniffles sniffles i wanna know what happnd next did you update somewherew else or something are you not continuing the story plzzzzzzzz say somthing whaaaaaaaaaa
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May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kabi please update. I am dying here. I keep checking constantly for updates. I hope there is one coming soon, because this is probably the best story on this website.