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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So it was the end. I did wonder. It seemed like such a perfect closing line. Thank you very much for this story. It has been an immensely enjoyable read.
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wails nashing and weeping... the last day of November- hopefully it goes for another year???
Jesse is a hero in his own way and I think he and Michael just grew up and together.
now Sui???
but Milan and Tiger- yay. and Tega and James now the mystery baby?
Sloan was right that he once had his freedom and it was taken but maybe Clint is trying to be nicer
I like this story
Jesse is a hero in his own way and I think he and Michael just grew up and together.
now Sui???
but Milan and Tiger- yay. and Tega and James now the mystery baby?
Sloan was right that he once had his freedom and it was taken but maybe Clint is trying to be nicer
I like this story
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wails nashing and weeping... the last day of November- hopefully it goes for another year???
Jesse is a hero in his own way and I think he and Michael just grew up and together.
now Sui???
but Milan and Tiger- yay. and Tega and James now the mystery baby?
Sloan was right that he once had his freedom and it was taken but maybe Clint is trying to be nicer
I like this story
Jesse is a hero in his own way and I think he and Michael just grew up and together.
now Sui???
but Milan and Tiger- yay. and Tega and James now the mystery baby?
Sloan was right that he once had his freedom and it was taken but maybe Clint is trying to be nicer
I like this story
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I just read 42 chapters of mpreg fiction! But that just goes to show how good this story is. You're an exceptional writer, and the universe and social structures you've created are interesting and actually believeable. Can't wait to know what's gonna happen to Jesse and Sai, those two seem to be about the only not-yet-totally-broken carriers in your story. Also anxious about Havar, he's been put through so much shit it was painful to read at times. I'll be coming back for updates!
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really hurting me. Why do I like it?
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you really scared me for a minute with the whole Tiger thing. I'm glad he's been reunited w/Miljan. I don't know why but even tho Miljan seems really cold hearted (killing his bro and all), he doesn't seem like a bad guy - at leasts not to Tiger. I just hope that Tiger's dad doesn't kill him. Are you going to take the story to Mexico with Ortega or is he being written out? I'm enjoying this series so much & it's definitly one I eagerly look for here. Keep up the good work!
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The scene with Tiger made me laugh, it's funny, although I kept thinking it was going to end bad (someone killed); but it was funny even in the end XD. And what will happen with Sai (cliffhangeeeer) :S. I also hope Michael forgives Jesse... Great chapter, I await eagerly for more :)
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was worth the long wait!
Hilarious moment with Miljan and Tiger. Loved it! ^_^
Hilarious moment with Miljan and Tiger. Loved it! ^_^
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Holy crap. First you break my heart into a thousand little pieces with the previous chapter, and now you stomp all over it... *wibbles* Though the last scene with Tiger and Miljan was pretty funny in its craziness. I've been checking every day for updates, and this one did not disappoint. It was more than I even hoped for! Thanks you for this story and keep writing!
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the long new chapter, I soo love this story! Ha, ha, the Tiger/Miljan part was hilarious, I laught my ass of:) Love all of them carriers and can't wait to read more about them!