rate_review Reviews

Wow! So it really was the end.

Thank you for this fantastic story. I can safely say that it's one of the best here on aff.net. You can be proud of yourself!

Looking forward to reading "August",

TB ^__^

*sobbing* oh no the story's finished!:( I really liked it a great lot. I especially adored Ortega, Tiger and Havar but allt the characters were great. The last chapter is nice, with a happy end (sort of) for everyone.
It's great how you can precisly create moods and situations with few words. I also admire your fantasy to make up so many story lines and keep them all interesting.
Pleas go on writing! I didn't have time to read the second chapter of August yet, because it has been a creasy week, but I loved the first one.

Pierette:)

GOO! I was wondering if it would end when November was over...

Damn, what a good story though. I'm definitely favoriting it and reading it over and over again. I anticipate more of August, and I hope you write lots more on this site!

I loved your story and am a great fan of yours. I feel honoured that you decided to share the story with us, how ever I am not sure about Sai. I am a person who likes movies where evil wins, I would probably make Sai suffer and not give him a happy ending, therefore, people might not like it.

Oh that *was* the end! I've loved this story, and hated it too for its twistedness, and I will read August for sure. I'd like to know what happens to the people we've gotten to know, so many loose ends, but I can't say it's wrong to end it here either - a happy end for all wouldn't be true to the story and would diminish the things the characters have gone through. Maybe some day you'll get back to it, or I'll just have to make it all up in my head like you said. Thanks for the ride!

this is a superb and incredible story you've written. i'll miss seeing the updates but i'm happy you have a second one up and running. it was wonderful keeping up with 'november' since the beginning and i've come to love the characters very much. :)

Beautifully written, those last lines.

I'm a little sad that November is over, does that mean your story will be over as well?
I certainly don't hope so - there is still so much to tell, isn't it? Please keep doing such an amazing job! *-*

Was this the ending? Makes me feel all warm. What about Sai? And the apple?

Oh so many good things are starting to happen. It's like drops of water in the desert but it's good nonetheless and much needed. None of them are out of the woods yet though, I think. But we've reached the last day of November. It feels like it was longer than a month. What comes next? December? I mean, it can't be over yet can it? I do love my Sloane and Clint, and the others too, of course, and I wish the story would never end. Thanks for the new chapter, I love it.
Josie (1more_sickpuppy on LJ)

Thanks for the ride! I really loved the last two chapters. I'm so happy that Jesse has overcome some of his own fears and paranoia and that he's calming down. The part when he forgets which room is Michael's and then remembers that it was F for Fuck You made me laugh out loud. And I really like how Tiger and Miljan turned out, it's like the ultimate happy ending possible for them in that world, and Miljan's personality is nice; he's tough like the others, but he knows when to not lose his temper and when things are going too far (like the Havar-Yavisk trial). He also has a sense of humor that really goes along with Tiger's personality. That "I love you" at the end pretty much summed it up for me!

Thank you for the story, it was great! Looking forward to reading more of August!