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There... are so many questions and feelings going through my head about this story right now. Your writing style is fantastic, and this is soooo very interesting. The characters are delicious, and the plot and world is very unique. I'm on chapter 11 at the moment. I have to say...

...Yeah, I hate Sloane. I can't even begin to THINK that he did this to Ortega. UnFUCKINGbelievable. The whole set up-- EVERYONE, fuck them. Fuckers. Uugghghghh.

Anyways, I actually really love where the story is going, despite how much it's making me rage. It makes for a good plot. Though I hope Ortega... somehow finds happiness in all this BULLSHIT23WEFNDSR2REIUFWDJI.

... i had a moment there.

Moving on. Yes. Good job so far, I'll continue reading.

Great story. Really! Great story! I'm amazed how you can keep track of all the different people. And you really made me feel everything the characters were feeling. I am also impressed that you name the story in the month it will end in. You sure got everything planed, huh. Very impressing! ^-^

This is definitely a story I will come back to.

I love this story and probaly always will :). I find the idea fasinating and keep coming back 2 read it again and again. I do hope you write Sai's story as i so do wanna know what happens to the last of the "boys". Keep writing!

That was an absolutely insane rollercoaster. Wonderfully written, if terribly disturbing, but I couldn't stop and have stayed up well past my bedtime. Very cool and I'm really glad I had the chance to read it.

Great story, though very very very scary. I grew up in a country ruled by a dictator, I guess what's horrifying is even here in the states I can easily see the government/military taking away peoples rights. Thanks for sharing.

Hi Kabi--

I feel kind of sad now that this story has ended. It's a really beautifully written story and I enjoyed every minute reading it. Thank you lots XD But I really hope you could continue Sai's part. I mean, everybody has their own opinions and preferances on what should happen but it's just no fun listening to them; after all, they're just ideas. It has to come from the author herself, then only it could be taken as 'real.' Haha. That was just my opinion anyway. Thanks a lot! ^^

OMG I loved it. every fucking minuet of it. it made my cry and it made me laugh and it made me shudder and it left me speechless. it's amazing. simply amazing. I... just... -speechless again- and fucking indescribable, just how much I loved this story. you an amazing writer and this story in just fucking amazing. and I cant stop writing this word, amazing, because no matter how many times I say it, it still doesn't feel as if it's really showing how much I love your story.
and I really do. REALLY do. RE~~~ALLY do. argh, and it still feels as if I cant myself clear ;_;
OK, ill try again- your story touched my. (here, this is better :D) it touched a deep spot in me that now feels kinda empty, which is good. its that spot that sends shivers up and down my body when im reading something really good, and when I finish it it drains and im off again to find another good story to match the one before him. the last time I had this shiver was a long time ago, but I felt it again every tome I finished reading your latest chapter. and now it's stronger and emptier then ever. and this is how much I love this story.


so thank you so much, and please, never ever EVER stop writing amazing stories like November,
love, Puka.

Wow.. that was pretty cute. ^_^ I love Tiger and Miljan, they were the best couple in the story, with Michael and Jesse in a close second. This has to be one of the more inteligent stories I've read on this site. It isn't often that you find stories that are written well and have depth. They usually are only one of either and more often times neither. I love this story and I'm sad that it's over, but it did have a good ending ^_^ thanks for your diligent work in forming this complete literary masterpiece. And this review probably had a lot of spelling errors... oh wells

Hi, wow, the story was very powerful and i just kept reading, no matter how much it was hurting me. Thanks!

Marry me... Just... Marry me, Kabi and I will love and adore you forever. I loved this story, I loved the ending. Yeah, it was sad and there's always going to be those doubts and Havar is now suffering through RTS and that makes me cry, but the ending with Miljan and Tiger was sweet. Haha. I know they'll have some problems, but Tiger and Miljan are really very hopeful, as are Jesse/Micheal, Tega/James, and Sloane/Clint. I mean, Clint surprised me with how much he changed in the story, but he still has a long ways to go. Everyone has a long way to go, but the story was so hopeful and promising it was amazing.

Michael smiled happily, trailing after Jesse, who was pulling him along by his left thumb.
"I just have one request, Jesse - could I possibly get just fifteen more minutes of sleep first?"

Michael, I love him. I want a husband like him someday. Willing to pass up baby-making sex for a little bit more sleep. XD What a darling he is!

Anyway, I'm steadily becoming very incoherent at the moment, but I just wanted to send a review at least slightly displaying my absolute love and adoration of the story you've created. Amazing work, an amazing story, and truly a hopeful ending that maybe, eventually, though it may take a long time, things will get better for everyone.

I appreciate your work and I adore your story, Keep writing, Kabi, because you are amazing!

~LoLoChan