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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Now I am going to see if you have any other stories.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow....you seem to describe the early times when women were just one thing a bearing machine but with boys....... I hope Jesse will meet somebody nice....
Interesting story!
Interesting story!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is interesting....keep up the good work!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am in such passionate love with this story. I'm almost certain it's a concept of sudden male pregnancy capabilities I've seen before, but it usually doesn't involve a world on the verge of collapse due to an utter lack of females, which helps to better explain the desperation and reinforce the totalitarian law governing their lives. It's panifully apparent the military cares only about the carriers capability to do what they want of them, not about their personal wants and desires.
I love how Jesse remains firm in his own personal beliefs, but still collected, showing his anger and resentment through more mild acts of defiance. However, I think it would be appropriate if his anger surfaced due to being directly confronted by someone, most probably a counsler, about the general situation, his progress and record, or something they wanted him to do that wasn't simply to be brushed off. After all, even while he is restricted, and it is a contemptable situation, it is mainly an alteration of enviornment and activities, because the living is much like being forced into a dorm, the meetings like taking unwanted funneling classes, even the dates can be snubbed.
I raised an eyebrow when a permited hair length was mentioned, and I nearly threw a fit of inexpressible rage when the guard had the audacity to claim "carrier hysterics", as if their being able to bear children detracts from their being, not only human, but men. I'm dying, and I think all functioning females reading this ought to be too, it's like the pressures and limitations on women of the 50's on steroids.
So eager and waiting for more, and I apologize for being so verbose.
Nacht
I love how Jesse remains firm in his own personal beliefs, but still collected, showing his anger and resentment through more mild acts of defiance. However, I think it would be appropriate if his anger surfaced due to being directly confronted by someone, most probably a counsler, about the general situation, his progress and record, or something they wanted him to do that wasn't simply to be brushed off. After all, even while he is restricted, and it is a contemptable situation, it is mainly an alteration of enviornment and activities, because the living is much like being forced into a dorm, the meetings like taking unwanted funneling classes, even the dates can be snubbed.
I raised an eyebrow when a permited hair length was mentioned, and I nearly threw a fit of inexpressible rage when the guard had the audacity to claim "carrier hysterics", as if their being able to bear children detracts from their being, not only human, but men. I'm dying, and I think all functioning females reading this ought to be too, it's like the pressures and limitations on women of the 50's on steroids.
So eager and waiting for more, and I apologize for being so verbose.
Nacht
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Same person as above, and I'm sorry for doing this, but if Jesse, or another person equally upset with his forced compliance, could use this to express his opinion of how carriers are treated, looked upon, or "what they feel a carrier is", I would be bitterly satisfied. Brood Mare. That is, something existing and used for the express purpose of being bred(obviously refrencing horses).
Still adoring it, if somewhat militantly.
Nacht
Still adoring it, if somewhat militantly.
Nacht
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thx for the reviews, y'all!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The setting created is very intriguing. Thanks for the story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm speechless....
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the first chapter had me intrigued but by the fourth i am REALLY into it. you seem to take leaps and bounds in your writing and with the story every time you update, which is highly impressive and has me convinced that "november" has a great deal of potential and promise. can't wait for more installments!
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i just love this story more and more in each chapter.... please update soon!!!!!
i worship this story!!!!!... and u the writer of corse :D
i worship this story!!!!!... and u the writer of corse :D