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And Jesse is FINALLY behaving like how a carrier ought to be...
It took fights, a visit to hear the screams of Rowe, beating, and a claiming before he pipped down...
One tough cookie he is...

O_O What in the world is Brian thinking? 'rescuing' havar like that.... he's not thinking much eh...

oh god.... who's this Tiger character now...
his life's gonna be screwed up too?

This WHOLE STORY should be dumped into the 'ANGST' or 'DARK' section....

sorry. I don't mean dumped in a bad way.
more like "this story should be categorized under angst or dark"

Just that.... THIS STORY IS SO DARK! carriers are getting kidnapped and raped right left and center!
(sorry again If im the only one stating this =X )

all the husbands are bastards.

and when one nice Michael comes along. that jesse has to be a prick in the ass... gods *head wall* nothing is perfect.

life isn't perfect.

so this story is good.

wow wow wow

I just finished reading 46 chapters back to back in 2 days! :D

Do you remember me?! I was the one who read Ivan's story first and didn't know what was going on! @.@

Well, at the time, 2 days ago, I thought that getting change is something that one has a choice on it! but now after reading November, I get the idea that it sort of happens out of blue! O.o

and with different time range!!! Am I right?! it might happen in 17, like tiger, or in 23 like Jesse, or maybe older!!! So am I right to assume that there is no telling who's gonna change or whose not?! I mean maybe, for example Micheal, after marrying Jesse in 26, might change in in 30 and become a carrier?! lol (Now what gonna happen to that marriage?! :P

But really, is there any specifications that whose gonna become carrier and whose not?! O.O

I mean some one like Kosin become a carrier!!! I didn't feel the full impact of the situation when I was reading that story! but when ever I came upon his name in November, and thought about him, I shivered! and I was terrified instead of him! just thinking to be in the same situation as he is right now! God!!! that's awful! now I'm more eager to read the rest of that story! could you please update that one?! pleaseeeee (poppy eyes) :P

Well anyway, I'm just stunned at your world, at the people you've created, your PEN in general! It's amazing! You are such a strong author!

Now I think I'm gonna go read another story of yours! :D I couldn't do anything else in the past 3 days, except reading your fics! :P my mom is killing me! :[

oh I just wanna say that Tiger and Miljan in my favorite couple, they are really cute together! ^_^ especially Tiger being a little smart cub! lol he is something! :D very smart!

About Sai, I don't know if you have written his story yet, but I really like him to figure out the trick and every thing that guy (forget his name) played on him! I mean he never thought where the hell he came from out of blue that night rescuing him in the middle of ... no where?! I hope he understand in time not after he is stocked with the guy. I hope Sul, follow them! but some how the guy is an intelligence one! maybe he is the right one after all! but not so easy! some thing like this: Sai tell him: I know your plan, I figured it out, but I like you, so it's ok! something like that! :P

But so far, the most interesting person is Ivan Kosin, in my opinion!

well, I talked too much! I'm gonna bug you when I finished another one of your fics! ;) bye now! :D
R

Oh my god..I spent about 2 and a half or so hours reading this and I just can't explain how many emotions were running through my body as I read this story. First, I was just plain old angry when I read of the treatments of some carriers and how some of their fiances just hit them and treated them like third class citizens. It was also disheartening to read the scene where Brian and Havar were captured and to find out that Brian was killed while the nation celebrated the fact that the traitor was dead and the carrier was safe and sound..it really sent shivers down my arms when I read that sentence. Btw, is there a reason why you left out Brian in the cast list? Not sure if he seems like a minor character but what he did for Havar and to end up like that was very tragic..

I'm also glad to see that Clint was trying to become a better person for Sloane and their baby. I do hope you will write a sequel to "November" because I would love to read their stories of their future lives and babies.=) Thanks for writing this.

Thanks for the notes! Love this world. :-)

Thanks for the cast list, it's very helpfull. Nice beckground info. I always wondered what was the problem with James' father after this scene:

"You've got to be quick with his discipline - he's a mestizo; they're stubborn as mules." there was a tense pause before the man continued, gleefully, "And about as fertile."
Ortega's eyes spat fire, but before he could speak, James did. He turned, leaned casually against the counter, and his voice was calm, tone almost jesting, when he spoke.
"And that's something you'd know a little about, Ol' Johnny, Ol' Boy, isn't it? Infertility?" October 9

Now I know:))

This story reminds me of that book, The Handmaiden's Tale by Atwood. I am only in the first fifteen chapters but it is so terrible and sad. It is really very thought provoking, especially because it takes situations that are very real and very relevant even now, but totally turns them around and makes them horrifying because the subjects are male. And that leads me to ponder our existing gender relations.... I mean, as a woman I feel like I have a common history with other women, but that history is so often disregarded that sometimes the only way to make it real is to say, well, what if this happened to men? And that is what your story does for me. Because, you know, it is immediately horrifying and wrong in the context of the story, BECAUSE it is happening to men. It warps my head a little. Anyway, I'll keep reading. Thank you for sharing.