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Wow almost a really happy chapter.......... like they always say it has to get worse to get better....

Like everyday waiting for more!

"I have to laugh, Vichy. What else can I do?"
How can Vichy still think he can trust Sloane? This was a very quick update.

Aw cliffhanger. Hope to see more soon!

Jesse... how do you know its Michael's writing? wouldnt trust Sloan as far as I could throw him - I would take a chaperon anyway
the carriers are way to valuable for how they are being handled

havar better not get himself mobbed by a bunch of frustrated soldiers. i would almost rather have anton sabotage him for himself than have him outed in a more violent manner. what does anton look like? i felt kind of bad for tega. it seems really hard on him.

I really liked the narrating here with Havar and his 'mistakes'. Also I liked the scene with Ortega and James and the puppy, I think that James' contrite moment was really good. I hope there's more about Jesse and Havar coming up! thanks for the story

Poor Havar, He will be discovered. James does seem to be a good man. I hated him before, but I do wish that Ortega would get pregnant, maybe it is the sadistic nature of mine. Are carriers taken at birth to be raised in Centers? Or because Tega was raised by his grandparents he says he hasn't know a home? Cris and Andy are James's family?

I guess this answers my question. However does the Center just come and take now? My heart breaks for Ortega. However I am surprised religion still survives in its form as it is now. I thought it would have lost its potency, but the grandmother seemed to be a innocent soul who lives a simple life. I like how you listed Havar's mistakes; even the sublest thing endanger your life. Was Havar's friend talking about "doing" carriers? Yavisk is the Commander? I hope he does'nt subject Havar to gang rape. But it seems like under the circumstances any man would take what they would get and be very uninterested in sharing. If he does I am curious about whether Havar's friends would participate, or is that another mistake? Why are you making Havar's suffering linger?

I LOVE this story. Hope there's gonna be more....

Yay! An update finally! XD you con't know how much I was worried about you not updating... it seems that when I get really into a fic that the author stops posting updates XD am I really that uninspiring?