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by minkabi

schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gawd... that last sentence... *sniff*. It was only a matter of time for Havar to be discovered. Poor guy... How is it that no carrier happens to be with a halfway decent man? Apart from Jesse, that is, but we'll see about that. ;) Hope you'll continue soon. You rock!
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aghhh! Yasvik makes me sick.
person green
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very quick update. I wonder if Havar would be stronger than Ortega since he is a soldier and has some training of being tough mentally and physically. You would think the medicine practicioners would be sympathetic to carriers since they know all about human suffering but in this world there is no sympathy left. I hope Yavisk treats Havar humanely because nicely simply isn't possible. I am surprised that everybody displays homosexuality but I guess carriers are the new women with a few extra parts.
person lilian
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw double cliffhanger! I'm really looking forward to see what's going to happen to Jesse and whether Michael is really going to hurt him. Also, I'm really interested in how the Havar/Yavisk storyline is going and how that'll turn out. Really hope more will come soon!!
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH BOY!
person Nacht Kind
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm losing my mind, and it's not nearly as fun as I'd hoped it'd be.

They are not THINGS, they are not INFERIOR. They have all the same bits as any other guy, but with a few additions. I know why Jesse is so furious, because no one, NO ONE, seems to understand, they couldn't. He wants someone to see how disgustingly wrong and cruel this is, how thier lives have been violated. The only one likely to understand, to even LISTEN, is Micheal, thank God, to comprehend the stigma and stress and loathing in a life where you no longer have choice and are expected to be a good little Carrier and pop out as many spawn as you can, while tending the house, pleasing your husband, and never objecting. I'm sorry, but I'd have probably killed myself too.

Good Lord. This makes me grit my teeth.
Nacht
person Aleks
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate this world.....but I like your story......
person green
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am beyond angry. Who the hell I guess James did finally show his true colours. "Don't beat him too bad"? WHO THE HELL IS HE? The carriers are PEOPLE not ANIMALS! I would kill myself. There is nothing positive to focus on here. Not even the Buddha could do it. What is Rowe House exactly?
person green
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHO THE HELL DOES JAMES THINK HE IS? He is not going to beat up Ortega is he?
person cfweber1b
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree that they need to treat the carriers better. Beating them will just ruin the potential relationship- we dont buy abuse now and why would a group that depends upon the carriers to not become extinct not treat them with care. Poor Jesse, I hope Michael understands even just a little