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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really do write a great story, I get excited every time I see that you have updated. XD
Can't wait to find out about what's going to happen, 8D!
Can't wait to find out about what's going to happen, 8D!
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You always seem to pull it off, this thing at the end: A few shocking lines with few dry words. One has to read it again to figure out everything that's written in between. It's amazing and strangely touching. Maaaaan, you're really doing a great job...
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have you died....? No, seriously, I'm just trying to gauge a pulse here, as we've not seen hide nor hair of you in, for your typical updating schedule, a fair while. If it's one of those "real life's taken me hostage" or "my muse has barricaded itself in the bomb shelter and won't come out" things, hey, it happens. I'm not harping or trying to crack the bullwhip, just figure out if you're still breathing.
Hope the Abyss spits you back up,
Nacht
Hope the Abyss spits you back up,
Nacht
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you dont leave it with the carriers always getting the s..t end of the stick. Havar, Tega, Jessie, Vichi all deserve to be treated better- and you left Jessie waiting his punishment- hope/hoped Michael would be kinder better than the others.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! More updates! I love this story, I really hope you stick with it ^.^
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Lord...I absolutely adore this! And I love your writing. Beautiful. Very nicely done. Please update soon!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why can't they just ask? These guys are so frustrating! Oh I thought that was pretty naive of Havar to just stick his legs up in the air without asking why he was being asked to do so, I mean he was a soldier until his rape u would think he would be more assertive.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a sad chapter. It really makes you feel bad for Havar and the life he's going to have now. Amazing chapter and story, sorry I haven't reveiwed for this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
~Goldentrio
~Goldentrio
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. It was rather unexpected that both Michael and James didn't want Jesse sent to Rowe house. I felt like being: Ha! Kosin, you bastard, you were overruled! Anyway... it was very good. I hope to see a new chapter soon.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I am thrilled to see this updated! Was beginning to worry it was just one more in the long line of abandoned wips out there... Am so happy it's not!
It was very sad to see James is as bad as Clint, he seemed nicer for a while there, and not so violent. And poor Jesse gets blamed for everything - frustrating to be so powerless and without rights. Also, I'm waiting to see how Havar's story will tie in to the others', and where all this is going...
Thanks a million for the story!
It was very sad to see James is as bad as Clint, he seemed nicer for a while there, and not so violent. And poor Jesse gets blamed for everything - frustrating to be so powerless and without rights. Also, I'm waiting to see how Havar's story will tie in to the others', and where all this is going...
Thanks a million for the story!