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Clint and Sloane are interesting, and I wish James could be this nice and calm all the time... Getting someone to stop beating their partner isn't easy, but hopefully he can get Clint to see what he's doing, at least.
I don't love Brian anymore, but I feel very bad for him. And for Awni, and Havar. They are in a different part of the country than Jesse & co, right?

Waaah! More, More! I'm so enjoying this story and want to see what happens! Thanks for writing!

Goodness Kabi, you spin a very compelling world/tale here! I've never been really into mpreg - but I actually just read through all 32 chapters of it and I'm riveted! Your characters have such a clear voice. It reminds me a lot of the Handmaiden's Tale, but very creatively crafted into slash. Thanks - looking forward to the next update!

What was that I saw about Havar having "desire" for a life with Yavisk? Havar seems to be someone who is a submissive person naturally even when given the chance to be dominant, not that that will ever happen. All of these carriers are just going into holes they cannot climb out of. Now Tiger, there is a real tiger there. He might be a good friend for Havar. Miljan, I suppose might be another Michael. He did not want to see Yavisk raping Havar, and he did not want to see Brian being killed. He does not seem like a sadist. But that part about his heart thawing was funny, even in November. However, nice people in this story are rarely nice.

i like th story so far, the only thing is there are a lot of charcters and i feel like it would be beter if they had their own individual stories. Like everything isbeing crammed into one story. Other than that I really like the idea and cant wait until the next installment.

Hey, I liked reading the interaction between Tiger and Miljan. Thanks for the update, looking forward to more :)

Well Tiger's circumstances seem like they might be better than average. Though I'm not sure about Miljan. Somehow it seems every time we think there's a nice guy he turns out to be an asshole. So I guess I'll just wait and see. Maybe they'll be able to do something for Havar though. Even if it's just 'accidentally' shooting Yavisk in the head :D

Anyways, I'm still hoping this story'll take a turn for the better at some point. And maybe we'll get to see more of Jesse and his man, and hopefully things will be going well for them. And that's all, yay.

okay, so it's about 4 am mountain time, and I'm writing a review for you, but i just wanted to say that your story got me hooked and i just couldn't stop myself. I wanted to go to bed hours ago, and I couldn't tear my eyes away from the wonderfulness that is 'November'.

Can't wait to see more :)

~Myssez~

I dont' know what it is about this one that keeps me coming back for more. It's so depressing but I don't lose hope that things will somehow get better. That maybe some of these guys will not be all bad. I know it's set in a militaristic future but it still strikes me as very realistic. I guess it's because it deals with such strong emotions. You're doing a great job and whether it has a happy ending or not, I'll read this to the very end. Something is going to happen once the month is up and I want to see what it is.

Again thanks for a great story!

Oh. My. Fucking. God.

You had me crying on the second chapter- update, for the love of all things holy- and soon!