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Wheee for the update!
I notice you keep bringing in new characters, and I hope you'll still be able to give them each the space needed and tie everything together in a bigger picture.
Unfortunately I don't have much hope for this world... Change takes time, and our beloved guys are stuck here between a rock and a hard place. Havar really needs for someone to stop Anton abusing him physically and psychologically, and he needs a friend who's a little more grown-up than Tiger. I suspect the doctor is just being professional, but not really caring about him. Wondering how Jesse will hold up in this new situation, too. And I already miss seeing Sloane and Clint - for some reason Sloane holds a special place with me despite what his actions early in the story.

Whowww!! I just dicovered your storie and I loved it. This kind of stories, where a person is forced in an unwanted situation, and where other pretends it is for the better have always fascinated me. Unfortunately, that is not often well written and thought about. And often stories are stoped because authors no longer know how to make their characteres and situations evolve. So thank you. I am really eager for what comes next.
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M

Thank you for updating. Well written as always. Could you translate the few words that were exchanged in Serbian between the doctor and Miljan?

Oh I like the doctor. And I wonder what Yavisk muttered that made Miljan and the doctor look so surprised (maybe "I'm sorry"!). I think Tiger is going to try to escape too, with the way he asks about how long it takes, but I'm glad that Miljan doesn't want to get him pregnant yet. Also I feel so bad for Havar, and I liked how the doctor gave Anton a talking-to. i liked the plot twist too; I really thought that Havar was pregnant! Also with Joey, I wonder what his plans are, and I think the way Sai put Jesse's situation was really true.

Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more soon, I check every day!

Excellent story!

I love the characters, especially Havar. But I have a question: In this AU world, is it not illegal to kill people who kidnap a carrier? Does not anyone care if the carriers are hurt?

Will check every day for updates.

You finally updated! :) Perfect. Hopefully that awful man will take mercy on Havar now that the doctor has told him what's wrong. I also wonder what the doctor will say to him...Waiting for the other update. :)

This Story is awsome please give us the next chapter i cant wait to read im dying here.really good writing by the way.

I really actually like this story... A lot. It really shows that humanity does what it feels it needs to to survive although I think that if they were nice and gave them rights and just treated them like females then guess what they would get people who actually wanted to be in that role instead of knowing all their rights are out the window. I am surprised more people haven't killed themselves.
KP

Wow - love the updates, esp. the closet gay developments and closing scene btn Jesse and Micheal. You have such an intriguing mind! Hope you keep the story going. ;-) Thanks so much for writing!

Oh god!! I really love Jesse! He is so rebellious xDDD This story is great, I really can see such a future if something like this would happen.
And my second favorite person is Havar I hope Yavisk will die a slow and painful death!!
But I'm really impressed with your story and hoppe you will update soon^^