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by minkabi

person Anon
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awsome this is suspensful ... cant wait gimmeree more
person Bunny Me
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is awsome i looooooooooove tiger give me more!!! I wonder whats going to happen to sai. I want a baby to be born soon i wanna see the relationship with a carier and the father. Whene is tiger gona get married and have a kid i love him hes sooooooooo cute. Or sounds that way atleast. Update soon thanks.
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Sai, you bad little carrier! XD I'm loving this. Usually I don't like stories that have anything with the military, but this is my exception. I hope you update soon.
person FIC-LOVER
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE WHEN U ADD NEW CHARACTERS AND STORY IN EVERY CHAPTER. I LOVE TO READ YOUR STORY UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT TO READ MORE THANK U
person J42
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the quick updates! Love how the different threads are progressing... fascinating how you're always coming up new twists and bring us to a deeper level with Jesse and Michael (my favorite team. ;-) )
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I can't wait to read what happens next. ^_^
person Nacht Kind
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes I have. I find Jenner's world very frustrating as well, and I think Damon summed up my feelings about it very nicely when he was arguing against Zechariah being promised to someone without any say in chapter 33. I also understand Alexie in the most recent chapter, 40, the wolves are just pulling them into these situations "for their own good/benefit" expecting them to adapt to a completely foreign culture, like you story a completely foreign role, without the humans having a choice in it at all. I'd be a nurse and single, end of song.

But, yeah. Iodine, I even asked a friend if it was possible, she's a med student, she said 'yeah, but it could damage your ability to have babies after a while, and like abortion, even if an egg was fertalized it'd be gotten rid of'. She also seemed rather stricken at the idea that a person would have to resort to that instead of standard contraception. I felt bad for putting it in her head.

Yrs,
Nacht
person myssez
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was... certainly entertaining. I love this story, as I've said before! But that last sentence was the BEST! I can't wait until there is more!
person Kabi
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nacht, have you been reading Jenner?
person Josie
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wheee, I'm so happy at all the updates! And I feel so very very bad for Jesse and Sai and all other victims of this corrupt and totalitarian society. I hope at least that Clint won't give up on trying to be nice to Sloane, but recognize that he has a lot to make up for... One can only hope. Love this story!

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