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Great update, really wonder whether Tiger is pulling one over on Miljan to try and get away, or whether he's really swept up in sweaty teenage lust. I think Sloane really summed up the whole damn Stockholm Syndrome-but-I-hate-you syndrome with what he said last. And I really wonder what's going to happen with Havar and Yavisk. Yavisk says he wants to know Havar (reading his diary and such) and I think he wants Havar to accept him somewhat (trying to get Havar to kiss him) but all of his actions recently have shown that Yavisk really wants to control him. It's like Yavisk thinks the only way to get what he wants is to manipulate it out of Havar, and that's really twisted but also really interesting. Also I thought James' "bad Spanish" was really funny. I feel like he and Ortega are going to have a confrontation--thing is with all the couples, they have problems and might have met in really bad, damaging ways, but they never confront each other or talk about it, and I think that is definitely exacerbating the situation; I wonder if any of them are man enough to face up to the situation--but maybe not and they'll go straight to Mexico or something. Really eager to see how everything turns out.
Thanks for the update!

Emotional as hell... I love angst. There really is a lot of screwed up powerplay in this story, and I still think the abundant 'Stockholm syndrome' issue needs to be addressed somehow. And I was wondering earlier how Jesse and Michael went from Jesse not wanting to have sex again after that first time because it hurt (and hell, it wasn't 100% consensual, either), to acting like horny teenagers on their honeymoon.
But all that aside, I still love reading the story. It's kind of a guilty pleasure of mine.

Wow. Lovely...... and. TigerMiljanmakemewannadie.

Now, uh, uno pregunta?

What is Yavisk going to do with Havar?

In a way I kinda feel sorry for James, but only for Tega's sake. Miljan though has to be my favorite character, XD He's so funny and he's even nice to Tiger ^.^ This story is a work of art, I'm tell'n ya. I hope to see more soon.

Another great and interesting chapter :)

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I absolutely love your story. I like the plot and the characters (Yavisk ^_^) and the chemistry between the carriers and their significant other(right?). I don't know why but I really like Yavisk lol. Everytime there's an update I scroll up and down to search for the Yavisk/Havar goodness lol. Please continue and update soon!

Best regards.

I'm so full of love for this story!!!
I'm loving the angst and the h/c, and yeah, I'm loving it. Someone's gotta take Havar away from Yavisk. Soon.

TB, you're right. I apologize. I tend to get very stressed when I am trying to write, but I shouldn't have reacted quite so hotly as I did.

As always, your comments are much appreciated and welcome.

Again, sorry.

- Kabi

Grr. Forgot to put this up into my other review. Damn.

Would love to see Yavisk, Miljan and Killian's background info, maybe even some of Joey's or Tiger's. Eh, I'd like to see everyone's backgrounds. Heh. And where are Eric and Joey? And Killian and Awni? I miss them.... Will we ever see Vichy again? Will we ever meet Aniston?

It seems like Vichy's exit was so...subtle. I barely noticed he had gone until reading the chapter a second time. And Sloane...poor Sloane. No one left unless Suleiman can keep him company. (??Where in the world is he and what does he do??) Although he doesn't seem very talkative. And I'm still trying to figure out why he doesn't just call Clint.

Yavisk should lay off (no pun intended) Havar for a while. Maybe Havar should go hang out with Ortega! Both have a lot in common! Both have abusive (James isn't so much anymore, but still) husbands and both were raped their first time! They should have so much fun.

Guh. (is goo) The Miljan/Tiger interaction was... (slips into drain) Wantmoreprettynow.

Jesse. Good lord boy, (he's a man-whore!) do you want to get preggers now? So tentative at the beginning, so open-minded now! I like.

Ah, time to end my chapter lovin. Hope you get the next one up soon.

IwantTigerMiljansexloveinnextchapter.

If your chapters are depressing at least they have some stuff to counteract. Havar reminds of those depressed girls from movies who eventually kill themselves. But he has promised revenge. Soria's situation is a bit funny. The gov. is now going to watch her, is she involved in some kind of "Free carriers" movement? Is there such a movement going on? There has to be. Tega is going to Mexico now. Maybe he will be better. Sloane, Sloane, Sloane, what indeed will he do now? Clint might be pleased, but Sloane only seems to be depressed now, Tega-style. I have noticed something, your character come in with a bang, and leave with barely a noise, I barely felt Vichy's departure.