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for Fifth.

by limegreenandtangerine

person Anise
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I happened to stumble across your stories tonight and since this was a oneshot I thought I would give it a try and see what your stories are like and I have to say that if they're all this hot I'm definitely going to have to read them :) And that's saying a lot because sometimes with these kinds of stories I have a hard time with the humiliating acts/talk since it can seem a little too close to abuse for me but these two guys were just so good together that it didn't really matter to me at all, I just kept wanting more of them.

Fabulous story I can't wait to find the time to read your other stuff ^_^
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Jesus that was hot.

You two remain my top source for asphyxiationy porn. <3 Love this one-shot...
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oomph.

That's about all I can say about this. Wow.

Like your username, by the way.

I'm not likely to get my wish, but I'm craving more of this. The only thing better than the pain is the day after, right? When all the welts and bruises and aches and shooting, searing pains bloom in flesh and muscle?
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was intense. glad to see you guys with yet another post. i usually don't like the s&m type stuff, but this was well written enough that it didn't matter. your pairings are always so perfect for each other. i love it!
person mehmeh
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Leave it up to you two to create such a hot, raunchy sex scene. The BDSM kink really gave it a nice edge, I thought.
<--- very happy now.