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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys! Terrific update, as always!
So, I've been thinking... maybe there is a reason Domi tries to run away from Sean, even if she does like him a lot... I mean who wouldn't like him? Perhaps subconsciously, she knows that this man is someone important to her and she wants him badly, but then again her mind might "remember" the rape and the past incident and that is why she just runs away... I don't know, I'm just speculating.
Great work!
So, I've been thinking... maybe there is a reason Domi tries to run away from Sean, even if she does like him a lot... I mean who wouldn't like him? Perhaps subconsciously, she knows that this man is someone important to her and she wants him badly, but then again her mind might "remember" the rape and the past incident and that is why she just runs away... I don't know, I'm just speculating.
Great work!
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SUZIE---Hiya, favorite reviewer of ours! Mlle. Vasser (Domimique) and I (Sean) appreciate very much your generous input, and the interest you have in following this saga! We're interested too! Where will this all go?? Thanx much! :)
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May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all, kudos to you for the shower design! It's dreamy, I love it, I wish mine was like that!
I've said it before, but I'll say it again. I love how descriptive your work is. It does take the story on a higher level (outline and details of it, both).
Really sultry and sexy chapter, makes me crave for more.
I've said it before, but I'll say it again. I love how descriptive your work is. It does take the story on a higher level (outline and details of it, both).
Really sultry and sexy chapter, makes me crave for more.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright! This is getting really exciting! So, she does feel a connection to him. I wonder if Domi believes in reincarnation...
Waiting patiently for the next update!
Suzie
Waiting patiently for the next update!
Suzie
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a quick update! :)
What a terrible way to relive those situations and finally confirm that Domi is actually Felicia! I hope they can work things out and I'm curious to see how will Sean approach Domi and what her reaction will be.
Suzie
What a terrible way to relive those situations and finally confirm that Domi is actually Felicia! I hope they can work things out and I'm curious to see how will Sean approach Domi and what her reaction will be.
Suzie
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? I started reading your story and got hooked right away! There is a lot of depth in your writing and your use of the English language is one of the best I've ever read. I find your work extremelly descriptive and multi layered. I've never been to Paris, yet just by reading your description of the streets and the rest of the Parisian environment I thought for a minute I was there. In the first six chapters I've read, the characters are very well developed and, for me, it was very easy to sympathize, connect with, and feel for the two main ones, Sean and Dominique. I suspect there is more into Domi's past, as I'm very curious to know why her government documents reported a different age than her real one. Is she trying to get away from something or someone (family, friends etc.)?
I like the fact that you're using your author name, Vassel, and your co-writer's name, Sean, in the story. It's a nice personal touch!
I, also, adore Black Adder!!! There... I connected with Gappy as well! :)
Anyway, what I'm trying to say in so many words (I talk a lot, I know), is that I like your work very much and I can't wait till your next update! :)
Suzie
I like the fact that you're using your author name, Vassel, and your co-writer's name, Sean, in the story. It's a nice personal touch!
I, also, adore Black Adder!!! There... I connected with Gappy as well! :)
Anyway, what I'm trying to say in so many words (I talk a lot, I know), is that I like your work very much and I can't wait till your next update! :)
Suzie