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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
are you never updating this story again? how sad! we'll never know how their story ends..
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING!!! I love the setting, the characters, the intricate descriptions...all of it! I hope you update.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story and hit me up for the next chap of my story cause not releasing it on here till i get 10 reviews
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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter...
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories on AFF. Wonderful character developement. I actually care about the main characters, which I find difficult to do in other stories I've previously come across. Very descriptive. Excellent visuals. All in all fantastic work.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is probably going to be quite long since I’m reviewing three chapters and I love to talk… a lot.
Mind blowing!!!
That’s the only thing I can think of saying right now!!! I seriously don’t know where to start from. Once more, the description of characters, places, situations and emotions are exquisite. I haven’t been on vacation for the past 5 years and you write about Sean’s house by the river Seines… it totally blew my mind. I want to visit Paris… aaahh…
I loved the fact that Sean wears cuff links, I guess it’s part of who he really is… I also loved that Domi can walk in five inches heels! Kudos to the woman, she’s my hero…
Even though metal music or thrash is really not my kind of bag, Catatonic is actually quite good. Stone Temple Pilots are amazing!
Angelo is a dirty ol’ man, but I adore him. I like what you’ve done with his character.
Labette seems like a lot of trouble to me, she has to go… she’s not a fair friend and I can’t understand why Domi let her start spreading the rumor about her… women…. sometimes, I almost come to hate my gender.
Sean is probably the only man that even though he sounded pushy and needy, he came off as sweet, caring, cute, tender… need I go on? He really was a sweetie at the beginning when he was trying to please her and converse with her no matter what… You could so see his want, his need for her in his words. “You will come willingly, won’t you?”… awww, bless his heart…
Poor poor Domi… so, she is running away from something… and she has to deal with Labette’s shit as well… and she can’t understand what is the matter with her attraction to Sean… and what was Gus’ problem, really? I feel for her… and I envy her as well… because of the kiss…
What a kiss!!! Primitive want and mind-numbing lust. This is how every woman on this planet should be kissed. I think you should print the kissing part and start distributing it to men around…
That’s it for now… I’ve yet to read chapter 15… I’ll get back to that in a while.
I could say excellent, but I’m saving it for later… I have a feeling I will be using it soon for my next review. All in all, this story rocks. One of the best around here, hands down.
Mind blowing!!!
That’s the only thing I can think of saying right now!!! I seriously don’t know where to start from. Once more, the description of characters, places, situations and emotions are exquisite. I haven’t been on vacation for the past 5 years and you write about Sean’s house by the river Seines… it totally blew my mind. I want to visit Paris… aaahh…
I loved the fact that Sean wears cuff links, I guess it’s part of who he really is… I also loved that Domi can walk in five inches heels! Kudos to the woman, she’s my hero…
Even though metal music or thrash is really not my kind of bag, Catatonic is actually quite good. Stone Temple Pilots are amazing!
Angelo is a dirty ol’ man, but I adore him. I like what you’ve done with his character.
Labette seems like a lot of trouble to me, she has to go… she’s not a fair friend and I can’t understand why Domi let her start spreading the rumor about her… women…. sometimes, I almost come to hate my gender.
Sean is probably the only man that even though he sounded pushy and needy, he came off as sweet, caring, cute, tender… need I go on? He really was a sweetie at the beginning when he was trying to please her and converse with her no matter what… You could so see his want, his need for her in his words. “You will come willingly, won’t you?”… awww, bless his heart…
Poor poor Domi… so, she is running away from something… and she has to deal with Labette’s shit as well… and she can’t understand what is the matter with her attraction to Sean… and what was Gus’ problem, really? I feel for her… and I envy her as well… because of the kiss…
What a kiss!!! Primitive want and mind-numbing lust. This is how every woman on this planet should be kissed. I think you should print the kissing part and start distributing it to men around…
That’s it for now… I’ve yet to read chapter 15… I’ll get back to that in a while.
I could say excellent, but I’m saving it for later… I have a feeling I will be using it soon for my next review. All in all, this story rocks. One of the best around here, hands down.
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good so far and different. You must update soon. ^_^
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys! Good to hear from you again! I've been waiting for your update. :)
I absolutely loved the beginning of the chapter! I assume it was Felicia with Sean or them in some other life, but I'm not betting on it though. I always lose my bets... *sighs*
It was nice to see Domi "acknowledging" her feelings, or at this early stage of their relationship her lust, for Sean.
His poem was beautiful and captured nicely and precisely his need to be with her. I can't wait for the party!!! Excellent work! :)
I absolutely loved the beginning of the chapter! I assume it was Felicia with Sean or them in some other life, but I'm not betting on it though. I always lose my bets... *sighs*
It was nice to see Domi "acknowledging" her feelings, or at this early stage of their relationship her lust, for Sean.
His poem was beautiful and captured nicely and precisely his need to be with her. I can't wait for the party!!! Excellent work! :)
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely magnificent!!! I just love this chapter.
I love the way he watches her, I love the way she fantasizes about him. He clearly won't deny her anything and it was nice to see that she felt a bit more daring with him.
I found the part they opened up to each other really touching and the fact that they shared a lot of family problems certainly made it easier to relate with eachother and helped them communicate better.
I'm curious to know more about her life before Paris and I can't wait to see what happens when they meet again.
I also want to know if he remembers every past life of his.
Thumbs up!
I love the way he watches her, I love the way she fantasizes about him. He clearly won't deny her anything and it was nice to see that she felt a bit more daring with him.
I found the part they opened up to each other really touching and the fact that they shared a lot of family problems certainly made it easier to relate with eachother and helped them communicate better.
I'm curious to know more about her life before Paris and I can't wait to see what happens when they meet again.
I also want to know if he remembers every past life of his.
Thumbs up!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best online romance story I've read yet. Very well developed and written. Hopefully the next few chapters will be up soon.