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I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!! I knew that Kara was part angel but the way you tied everything together was simply amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love how you make Gabriel so loveable but Michael kind of obnixous.....I wonder if everyone will find out that Kara is part angel as well? I mean her father probably knows already but does Damien?
And I love how you foreshadow in this chapter...I mean there has to be a reason why the divine wanted Kara to be aware of Gabriel and Michael but not Adrian?
My favorite line: "She is cuddling with Lucifer's son! How does that not imply there's something wrong with my blood?" he demanded, crossing his arms over his chest."
I'm interested to know alittle more about Adele and Baxliyn, I mean did Bax love her, did she love him?
So does this mean that Kara is super special as she is 666 and number 4, I mean you mention that a few times in this chapter, so that has to mean that Kara is pretty important!
And poor Damien...he needs to wake up and find out how much Kara was protecting him from Michael, which was my favorite part, I mean that was so sweet...hahaha it's hilarious how Kara still thinks that it's not love....
I love this story so please don't leave me in agnony by not updating! :-)

HOORAY!!! I can't tell you how pleased I am to find that this chappie was up! =) I loved it, just in case you couldn't tell. Another testament to your creativity and skill. It was particularly amusing how Kara kept going "Oh bless, oh damn" in the latter part - the poor girl, she doesn't know how to blaspheme properly anymore! Hehehehe...

Given the truckload of information and twists in this chapter, I can see why it took longer than usual to write, and why you did so many drafts. Still, I fervently hope that Chap 15 won't take as long... I can't wait, especially for more scenes centred on Kara and Damien. Keep writing, don't even think about stopping, and hey, no pressure. :P

Seriously though, great job.

update quick please with devil cake on top

Still loving it! Loving your writing abilities and your abilities in using proper spelling, punctuation, and grammar all at once. I ablsolutely love how you wrote this story; the plot of it is very entertaining and dramatic. Keep up the great work!
Christi

Great chapter as always. Took me a while to get to read it. Works got me busy.

Hope you start working on the other story soon too. Can't wait to see what happens there either.

major HUGS.

Nice chapter. worth the wait definatly. Hope you update your other stories to.

To quote one of your reviewees (Bathory, 2007-08-14): "...rooting for the antichrist? That should tell you how good a storyteller you are!"

And it's absolutely true. I loved your latest offering: the action was believable and well-written, and I feel you've definitely made a step towards intensifying Kara and Damien's relationship. Again, my only criticism would be that you need to update more frequently - though being in uni myself, I know that that's not always possible, unfortunately. Hehe, don't mind me, I just can't wait to read more!!

Kudos kudos kudos,
=) Roanne

You know, I almost wish I hadn't started to read your story, because it KILLS ME to wait for the next update! I'm on twice a day checking to see if you've updated yet!

As I'm sure you can tell, I'm very excited to see where this story is going, and ANXIOUSLY awaiting the next chapter.

Good job on the last chapter... and get Kara and Damien together soon! (Forgive the bossiness, it comes out with stress :)

Bathory

I usually don't review but this is an interesting story. I like how you write and present your characters. Looking forward to your next chapter.

you're my hero. great chapter. sorry i haven't been commenting... like you said, college consumes a lot of time. new chapter soon please and i'll promise to love you forever lol