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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've been following this for awhile now and i just wanted to say i *love* it. i love the whole thing with the demons and the antichrist and everything...so if making your first attempt at romance star the antichrist says something about you, the fact that i love the concept behind it is probably saying something similar about me haha. i can't wait for the next chapter :D
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! I am really enjoying it. I was sad to see that you haven't posted too many stories. I hope that you add them soon!
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! they finally get together without the hemming and hawing or major "plot twists" writers here tend to employ just to prolong the angst. just one thing though, why is Kara so blind to Damien's feelings for her? i find it hard to believe she didn't have the slightest inkling as to why Damien hated Adrien. picking the antichrist probably just says you're an insanely awesome writer who is adept enough to not fall into cliche storylines and retell stories told a million times before. and you're probably also crazy. but it's all good.
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
btw, please don't write explicitly sexual stuff just for the sake of doing it. your description of their kiss is waaaayyy hotter than most of the stuff in the erotica section. ^^
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great way to finally tie in the kiss. It is going to be great to see how her dad reacts next chapter. I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses now that it has a head start! I will be waiting for the next chapter.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about the lemon thing. I think most of your readers would prefer to have you continue to write in your style and comfort zone than to sacrifice flow for the sake of descriptive sex. I know I do.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sooo i love you & your writing.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read a makeout scene that hot in a long time. Wow.
Thanks for updating! Good luck on your papers!
Thanks for updating! Good luck on your papers!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is your first time doing romance?! You're pretty good at it. This story is becoming my favorite.
As for the story, I think it's progressing very well. Damien would never had made the first move. I'm still loving that bless it thing.
Looking forward to your next update. Can't wait to see Daddy's reaction and why he hates/dislikes Damien.
As for the story, I think it's progressing very well. Damien would never had made the first move. I'm still loving that bless it thing.
Looking forward to your next update. Can't wait to see Daddy's reaction and why he hates/dislikes Damien.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. This chapter was so worth waiting for. Guess that means waiting for the next one won't kill me either. But this is so, so good, that it's hard to be patient. I loved that she thought Damien smelled like birthday candles. There is a sweetness to that that's brilliant. Greatly looking forward to what her dad has to say. Also--that was an incredibly sexy kiss with a twist of happy fluff in it. Loved it.