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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am still in love with this story. That was an interesting twist with the Michael showing up. I am still a little bit confused why he showed up though, that should be interesting to see.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always, very good!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This really is a fantastic story; I just spent the entire day reading through it! You have excellent skill in writing and I think it's fine that you didn't add a lemon in the story if you didn't want to. It would have worked with the story (being about the Antichrist and whatnot) but you've still made it work without being explicit. I also love your originality and creativity in making this story; all of the demons of hell are not only scary in the ways they should be, but they're also SILLY which I find very endearing. Outstanding work, I must say.
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! So happy you are back!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing! So happy you are back!
Dami being frightened about having daughters...was priceless. Of course he would be protective of his daughters! I would love to see that. lol
That scene with Michael was intense. He may have disowned Kara but I think he really does love her. They are all worried that Dami is like this big bad demon who would break her heart and yes he is a big bad sexy demon but he totally loves Kara which is so sweet. Their first date *sigh* was soooooooooo cute.
I can't imagine you ending this story, it's soooooo good.
Dami being frightened about having daughters...was priceless. Of course he would be protective of his daughters! I would love to see that. lol
That scene with Michael was intense. He may have disowned Kara but I think he really does love her. They are all worried that Dami is like this big bad demon who would break her heart and yes he is a big bad sexy demon but he totally loves Kara which is so sweet. Their first date *sigh* was soooooooooo cute.
I can't imagine you ending this story, it's soooooo good.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Please update soon!!!?
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story! i honestly cannot wait for the next update ;]
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about dropping of the face of the Earth. I work retail so I literally had no days off. And the 2 that I did have off they called me in...and I love money so...
Unfortunately it has stolen my attention away from this lovely work of art. I'm happy about how everything has turned. You answered my main questions and you hinted at a few other ones. I can see why her dad was a "little upset". It just amazes me that everyone has the same opinion of Dami, no matter what side their on. Kara is right, they all sound the same. But let's not beat it into the ground.
This is a pretty nice wrap up. (Can’t wait for the last chapter.) I did laugh at her not wanting him to met her mom. You have to admit it is pretty funny. After everything they went through but would they be "real people" if they didn't have a few flaws. (I did think about the last name. Couldn’t come up with anything symbolic, like most of the other names you picked. Perhaps I should have gone to bible school?) I will confess, I re-read the scene where all four of them were talking about 2-3 times to make sure I was getting everything right. (How you manage to write it I will never know.) You have to love the fact that they talk to each other telepathically while holding an outside conversation at the same time. Unless you know they have the ability to do it you would never realize what was going on. (Wish I could do that.)
You know...if this story is anything like your usual work I think you'd be a great young adult author. No really, think about it. Hope your holiday was nice and I can’t wait to see the last chapter. (Wow…this is the shortest review I’ve ever given you.)
Unfortunately it has stolen my attention away from this lovely work of art. I'm happy about how everything has turned. You answered my main questions and you hinted at a few other ones. I can see why her dad was a "little upset". It just amazes me that everyone has the same opinion of Dami, no matter what side their on. Kara is right, they all sound the same. But let's not beat it into the ground.
This is a pretty nice wrap up. (Can’t wait for the last chapter.) I did laugh at her not wanting him to met her mom. You have to admit it is pretty funny. After everything they went through but would they be "real people" if they didn't have a few flaws. (I did think about the last name. Couldn’t come up with anything symbolic, like most of the other names you picked. Perhaps I should have gone to bible school?) I will confess, I re-read the scene where all four of them were talking about 2-3 times to make sure I was getting everything right. (How you manage to write it I will never know.) You have to love the fact that they talk to each other telepathically while holding an outside conversation at the same time. Unless you know they have the ability to do it you would never realize what was going on. (Wish I could do that.)
You know...if this story is anything like your usual work I think you'd be a great young adult author. No really, think about it. Hope your holiday was nice and I can’t wait to see the last chapter. (Wow…this is the shortest review I’ve ever given you.)
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<3 your story lots >< Its so sweet and romantic. It doesn't seem like your first try at all. And I like how their are other genres besides just romance. Like drama and adventure. Anyway update whenever you can.
Last names... I'm not so good with names, well guy names. Oh well, surely others will help you.
Last names... I'm not so good with names, well guy names. Oh well, surely others will help you.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute! I love this story so much...