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arg!! i'm really getting into this and its really frusterating when it ends like that!! D: i'm just complaining, i guess. anyway, keep up the good work. your story is really making me excited for the next parts.
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I love this story, im hooked already, their world is fantastic. please keep the next section coming...

so far, you have me hooked. =]

I love this story!! Seriously, this is great. Kara is a great character. And Damien is all dark and brooding...love it.
So I'm thinking that the other Demon was there for Kara because she is the only half female demon which means if she has children with another demon, they will probably be really strong. Thus, I bet she is going to be hunted by all these demons who want her to have their children. DRAMA. Love it. I don't know if you are going to make Damien the love interest....if so, he is not going to be happy hearing about the other demon!
Can't wait for more!!

Yeah you updated! So, who's the mysterious Demon? It must be very useful to be able to shoot annoying family members when they are mean to you and not really hurt them. Longer update next time, please?

haha!! this is relly entertaining. i can't wait to see where you go with this. please update soon

I like this, and I am sure it was a good thing she turned out looking like her mother. I mean who want's to look like a nine foot tall red demoon. I like this please continue it soon.

Awesome so far! I can't wait to see where you take this.

hey i like it so far i hope u update soon