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sigh~ i love you. thats pretty much all i can say about this chapter. absolutely amazing!! hmm lets see.. 1/2 demon kara + childhood friend and potential lov interest + a new suiter who is a half angel criminal = most amazing thing i've read, ever. please update soon. you make me giddy with pleasure every time i see a new chapter. heh heh <3

I love how Kara actually thinks Damien only cares about his pride and not her when I think Damien is pretty damned pissed that some demon tried to have his way with her looking like him! LOL.
Awesome chapter! I can’t wait to see what Lucy wants to discuss with Kara, maybe possibly suitors? Or how he expects her to get with his son....hahahaha.
I wonder who Damien has in mind to watch over her.

I LOVE where you are taking this story! What a twist! Two angels are protecting her now? Wow, now I’m thinking maybe she will get with the younger angel instead of Damien or at least he will have competition from Adrian..that would be very hot! :-)

"Adrian is… special," Erik said. "We were told to make him aware of his true parentage. And we do not question the Will of God."...I wonder if this is connected to Kara?

I love how Kara is like “what I’m going to college” and petrified about having kids but yet she is so desirable by the demons because she can have children...I wonder if this applies to the angels as well?

I love this story.

Yep cleared that right, I wonder how I missed it? Anywho, so new angel boy huh, I kinda liked the idea of her with the incubus but it is your story, I am so happy you updated though, great story.

omg this story is sooo cool... but couldnt u have at least given her one trippy power? *puppy dog eyes*

Wonderful chapter!! Im very excited for the next one! Keep up the great work!!

I really like this story, although Damien is kinda strange towards Kara, are they cosin's or not? And what is with the Incubus dude, is that really who had come into Kara's bedroom, and if so why is he doing this. You will write more about him, right?

this story is intense!! haha.. you need to update sooner because i'm absolutely addicted. great job
+cad

How I love this story…let me count the ways!
Oh my gosh, that demon impersonated Damien!?! Wow, they really want her badly. It’s a good thing she has Lucifer and the sexy Damien to protect her.
“When I'd been fifteen I'd had to kiss his incubus friend again before he'd snapped out of his trance.
And then he'd punched his friend in the face. I was hoping to avoid that this time around, especially since there was no incubus here for me to duck behind.” Gee I wonder why Damien got all angry and protective…could it be because he thinks Kara belongs to him. I love how you described his anger like he shut down…wow I can’t imagine how angry he would be if he ever caught another demon trying to have his way with Kara!?!
“I gaped. Lucy would kill me. He'd kill me once for not telling him about this earlier and then he'd kill me again because his neat-freak personality would be furious with me for getting blood all over his carpet.” I wonder if Lucy has grand plans for his son and Kara to get together as well and he will not be happy if he knows that other demons are coming after her!
Please post again soon!! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

...Wow. Put angels and demons into a mix of reality shows and prime-time soaps, and you'd get something like this, only not as good as this, mind you.

This is quite a creative spin on the paranormal and supernatural world. I'm actually quite impressed. Your grammar and spelling are flawless, your dialogue and situations within the story shift more towards present time, shich is a nice touch, and your characters seem realistically crafted with an otherworldly touch.

Go on. I'd like to see this through. Good job!