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i've been waiting for ever for you to update when are you going to i love this story and every day i cant wait till you update

I've been dipping in and out of this story for the past week; that's not to say that I couldn't bear to sit down and read it all in one go (believe me, I TRIED), just that I didn't have enough time to it in front of the computer as I'd like. Needless to say, I LOVE it so far; not only have you clearly mastered basic spell, grammar, punctuation etc. which unfortunately seems to be a rarity on this site, but you've also got fantastic characterisations, an informal, down-to-earth writing style, and a really original, humorous plot. Kara is a well-developed protagonist; likeable, not too flawed, not too perfect, and her relationship with Damien is fun to read. I'd love to read more about Adrian, though; I sense a potential love triangle.

Please update as soon as you can.

I love everything about this chapter, Damien's jealousy and his sweetness. The demons trying to set them up....Damien talking about their children, god he really seemed wistful about it, while all she cared about was getting back at her father! LOL. Priceless. And the fact they are both 666 and super powerful, I knew it! I knew she was powerful. Also, I love Adrian as well. I mean the funny thing is that he is supposed to be the angel but he is all bad boy, I mean for Pete's sake, he totally asked to come up to her room! LOL. While Damien is the devil but he totally respects and is protective over Kara. Did I mention how much I love this story!!!!!!
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Her and Damien are so cute together, i think Adrian and Kara would get in soooo much trouble if they were found out.. he he he

"As long as he fit Bax'liyn's criteria. Right. Bless it, this was ridiculous! I didn't have to take this!"


i love it how the words 'bless it' is said like a swear word

Wow, to tell you the truth, this fic of yours was a surprise! I had seen it often, but had always bypassed it because (to put it bluntly) I was dead certain that you'd end up being one of those authors who chose to write about something quite far-fetched but didn't have the originality or skill (or basic understanding of grammar and spelling!) to pull it off.

Now I'm kicking myself for not having read this sooner... Not only can you spell and punctuate nicely (thank God!), but your writing style is very entertaining: humorous, well-paced, slightly informal. Your characters (torture-loving, weapon-throwing demon/part demon though they are) are likeable, memorable and surprisingly human. The plot is, needless to say, quite original and creative. I love it how you've managed to make extremely 'non-normal' things (e.g. spending weekends in hell with the devil himself, decapitation, immortality/invincibility) seem so mundane and nochalant. And the Devil as OCD with a cleanliness compulsion? Absolute riot!

You're doing a great job, kudos! I hope you update soon.
x Roanne

Loved it!! It was a very humerous!! =]]

So no more Ianev? Darn I was kinda interested in him as a character and was hoping you would keep him on. So I think her dad will take her head off if she has a kid with an angel, wait canshe have a kid with an angel? I love the updating thing, keep it coming.

UGH!!! i don't know who to choose... damien vs. adrian
right now i'm a HUGE damien fan but i can see myself accepting karaxadrian although probably not as much as i adore karaxdamien. [mock solomnity] so in conclusion, i prepose the conjoining of body and mind of kara and damien at the conclusion of this romantic-comedy. although i would have no qualms against a plot twist or two here within.
haha i'm completely joking. kind of. i'd never try to write your story for you. just remember that you'd have one jubilant fan if the afore mentioned coupling was used.
your forever loving fan,
Cadavre

angel *raises eyebrow* well i wonder what that cost the demons... Damien seems rather obsessed with his 'cousin'

though i can see there is definently something between Adrian and Kara... of course she loves the bad boy's (shes half demon, makes sence to me)

anyway this chapter was great :) update again soon