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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
definetly not level-headed, I didn't realize inaev was a bad guy, to bad. interesting that damien doesn't have a gun, i mean it makes sense. love the updating thnig.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You describ every thing in great detail. 2 thumbs up and 5 stars.
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay update!!! okay, this chapter made me bang my head against the table. how could she be so oblivious to dami? + i really enjoyed how you weave in little details to make everything seem so realistic. good job!
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THis is such a kick-ass story. Please update.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great! damien is s jealous, i wonder why kara doesnt see it?
half angel and a half demon would make interesting children
half angel and a half demon would make interesting children
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know for being the anti-christ damiens not very confident
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderfully written story and i'm really ashamed to say i've bypassed it a few times just because of the plot (most people who write this are...well...) Anyways! i'm glad i read this and i'm really impressed by your writing, really funny, original (you made it original) and completely and totally awesome. i'm in love with damien. please let me have him if she's not taking! ;)
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. i actually read this twice. i'm extremely excited for the next chapter and i'm not sure what to say. way to put the pressure on!! haha jk.
i really liked this chapter. especially when damien showed up. i knew from the last chapter that damien was in love with kara by the way he talked about children in that whistful manner, and the second half of his reaction in this chapter, i think, just supports it. right now i'm kind of confused whether he knows it himself though. also, you're really making adrian very attractive with each chapter. and i'm not talking just physically, but i'm still a big damien fan. what else... oh! i know some people might think it's ambitious but i think i'd be amazing to see and read this as a book. even if you finish it online, i'd still buy two copies. :D i'd be interested to see if or how editors would change this up and whether it'd be positive or negative. i'm actually planning on rereading the entire story right now. the time between posts makes the events in the previous chapters blurry, unfortunately... :/ (thats why i mentioned the novel idea, they're easier to read but i suppose you probably wouldn't get amazing feedback from me!)
by the way, you're quickly becoming one of my favorite authors, on paper and online. keep up the good work!! and about the last review... i have no idea what kind of crack i was on but i'm sorry you had to be on the recieving end on it ^-^;; lol
there were other things i wanted to say but i seem to have forgotten with the length of this... would it still be a review or is it more of a comment? ... anyway i'll be spamming your story with my words of adoration. hope you don't mind. :)
i really liked this chapter. especially when damien showed up. i knew from the last chapter that damien was in love with kara by the way he talked about children in that whistful manner, and the second half of his reaction in this chapter, i think, just supports it. right now i'm kind of confused whether he knows it himself though. also, you're really making adrian very attractive with each chapter. and i'm not talking just physically, but i'm still a big damien fan. what else... oh! i know some people might think it's ambitious but i think i'd be amazing to see and read this as a book. even if you finish it online, i'd still buy two copies. :D i'd be interested to see if or how editors would change this up and whether it'd be positive or negative. i'm actually planning on rereading the entire story right now. the time between posts makes the events in the previous chapters blurry, unfortunately... :/ (thats why i mentioned the novel idea, they're easier to read but i suppose you probably wouldn't get amazing feedback from me!)
by the way, you're quickly becoming one of my favorite authors, on paper and online. keep up the good work!! and about the last review... i have no idea what kind of crack i was on but i'm sorry you had to be on the recieving end on it ^-^;; lol
there were other things i wanted to say but i seem to have forgotten with the length of this... would it still be a review or is it more of a comment? ... anyway i'll be spamming your story with my words of adoration. hope you don't mind. :)
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You rock :)
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you updated and haven't sent Ianev away yet. Yippie, I mean I like Adrian but the whole idea of an incubus being ater her was an extrmely cool idea.