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for Speak of the Devil

by GuilandRos

person Bee
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!! You my dear are bloody brillant! That was an awesome way to end that chapter, I was literally on the edge of my seat!

I love everything about that chapter. The interaction between Adrian and Kara. The interaction between Damien and Kara. Oh and most of all the appearance of .....Ianev. I'm assuming the reason why Kara was so sick was because Ianev was close by...maybe he was interferring with her telepathy with Damien so that she couldn't speak to Damien (since it was too painful) and thus she would be alone for him to find her?!?
Oh I hope Adrian can protect her...he was so sweet to sing a lullably for her...I mean even though I absolutely LOVE Damien, I do have a soft spot for Adrian. LOL.
Damien is going to be soooooooo pissed if Ianev touches or harms her before he can reach her.....oh man oh man.
I can't wait until the next chapter....please don't leave me in suspense for too long...or I'll die. Okay fine I'm being melodramatic but you get my point. ;-)
person Bee
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! I'm looking forward to your next chapter as well! :-)

I still think there is something more to Kara knowing angelic....I am really excited to find out how it all turns out!
Damien is so cute...he would defend her against the end of the world and she doesn't even know it. LOL. I love the dichotomy you create in Damien's character...I mean on one hand he can be scary as hell since he is the anti-christ and then on the other hand he can be so sweet, loving, and protective....
He is going to be so pissed when he finds out that she left the complex...and with Adrian....oh there is going to be hell to pay. LOL
Love this story!!!!!!!
person shadow
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shes hald demon... do you really expect her to follow rules?... except the fact that he's the anti-christ
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
next chapter please (she asks sweetly)
person ag
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! update! i love that you update so often :D for some weird reason i find Eric really funny. like a person you'd simultaneously want to punch and/or laugh at. hmm.
person shadow
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he he now shes got damien following her everywhere...lol
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is my addiction. it feels so good to be reading it but as soon as the effects are over im in a state of depression. i'm really excited about the new angelic speak. it sounds like an amazing twist-to-be. and honestly i don't know where you're going to take it which peaks my curiosity. i don't know if i'm just reading into the story too much,but i think kara is starting to figure out damien's feelings for her. good job with this because i really don't like those stories where the main character is overly nieve. you're doing a magnificent job with this story!! keep up the god work, update soon and thank you for this chapter.
person Bee
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Damien sat up and glared at me. "Bad boy?" he asked, face red. "I'm the Antichrist. What the fuck makes him so much more special than me?"

Oh my god, I laughed so hard when I read that sentence....seriously I'm surprised that Kara hasn't noticed how in love Damien is with her but I guess from her perspective she's seen him as family for so long that she can't possibly see him as in love with her. LOL.
I like the Kara/Adrian twist but what I really like is how you write Kara. I mean she's a typical teenager girl, she is not in love with Adrian but can totally she herself spending the summer with him, which is normal behavior. I love it.

I'm glad you enjoy my reviews. :-)
person Bee
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh this is getting very interesting...Ianev escaped?? Good thing Damien is there to protect Kara because I also think Ianev has his sights set on Kara!
I wonder if Kara knowing Angelic, means anything more? Does her mom have an angel blood in her or will this affect her relationship to angels??

Lovely chapter as usual! I can't wait until your update!!
person tasha
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i seriously love this story so much!!!! Thanks for the great reading.