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ahhhhhhhhhhh I love it I love it I love it....let me count thee ways of how much I loved that chapter.
I was about to say "where was Damien?!?" But of course you added that excellent ending with him and the sword, and his sexy protectiveness....I swear I could feel how happy Kara was to see him because I was just as happy! LOL.
Adrian is really really intriguing....I mean half angels can't actually hurt demons, but he could. He could also heal Kara....well you never actually told us what his other half was, we just kind of assumed it was human but maybe he is half something else??
I cannot wait until the next chapter...I cannot wait to see the big battel scene between Damien and Ianev, I mean Damien is sooooooooo gonna kick his butt!

Goodluck on your move........but also don't forget about us because I love this story!

I only have a minute, but I have felt guilty for not reviewing for the last few chapters, and I can't live with myself if I don't at least say a few words now.

You're story is absolutely wonderful. Really amazingly put together. I suspect the reason it hasn't gotten more hits and reviews is that your subject matter can be sensitive to some people, and because of that they choose not to read it - I'm sure you realized that when you started the story - but that doesn't change the fact that it is very well done. Humorous, action packed, dramatic, and of course romantic, all rolled together in a very nice presentation.

I am really rooting for Kara to get together with Damian (rooting for the antichrist? That should tell you how good a storyteller you are!)

I look forward to each new chapter, and am truly looking forward to how this story will be end. I praise your work thus far, and encourage you not to let real life completely take you away from this story, to finish this wonderful story so we who are impressed thus far can see this creation to its end.

My best,
Bathory

I really like it so far. Its getting heated and i luv how the antichrist actually has feelings for her =)

I was happy to see this updated. I'm glad Damien finally showed up...I've been waiting for him. I like Adrian and all, but... he's no Damien. I can't wait to see him in action. And I also can't wait to see how he's going to reign Kara in - if he's going to.
I'm also wondering just how big a deal her having a child -- a demon child is going to wind up being. I would think it would be a pretty big deal. She is the only female after all.

Great job, I can't wait to read more!

MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!!! lol Great job so far. :D I love this story so very much. :D Anyways, keep up the great work and please *do note the pout* update sooner... Pretty please... With a cherry on top... And a bunch of ice cream with hot fudge... And a cookie... lol
Christi

Oh my gosh!!! That was the worst cliff hanger!!! I can't wait for you to update it! I wonder after Damien defeats this creep how he is going to react. I can't wait to see him in his all shining armor, and maybe upsetness over her leaving! I can't wait!

This is a great story!!! I can't beleive how good it is! You have to update and definently finish this story as soon as possible! I can't wait to keep reading and finally get to read the end of the story. I wonder if you know who is a full angel, but everyone was hiding it, or if he is someone important, and that is why no one said anything. But I really want to know what happens between Damien and Kara! I really hope it is those two who get together in the end. It will be exciting to see what Damien does to this past boyfriend when he finds him. Update soon please!

Just as good as the other story.

Can't wait for another chapter.

Oh my god that was so worth the wait, I don’t even know where to start!!
I have to admit, I was a bit surprised by how tender Ianev was with Kara..I’m thinking he might want her for more than just power, maybe he has some genuine feelings towards her. Don’t get me wrong, he still needs to get his ass kicked by Damien, I just thought it was interesting that he seemed to be tender in his amorous intentions. LOL.
You know who surprised me the most in this chapter…Adrian! I mean he was no longer injured and he seemed a lot stronger than what he appears to be so I wonder if he actually has some powers than Kara doesn’t know about.
I can’t believe that Ianev broke the telepathic link between Kara and Damien, oh Damien is going to be so pissed! Where is that big lug anyways…I miss him. Will he make an appearance in the next chapter? Yeah that’s why I thought that Ianev had more serious intentions with Kara like he plans to make her his mate or something since he did something major like transfer the telepathic link to himself?!? I feel bad for Kara, I think you did a wonderful job in portraying her, I mean on one hand she is just a human girl who should feel scared and helpless but at the same time she is half demon which makes her strong and fearless and I think you do a great job of balancing her personality.
I hope you are feeling better and I absolutely love this story so please update soon.

i'm glad you're feeling well enough to post! :D it's an interesting concept, the breaking of telepathy link. i'd imagine it similar to cutting of a telephone line? how does one restore a lost connection? hmm...

love this chapter - can't wait to see what happens next! gonna hop over and review Bad Moon Rising :D