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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great stuff
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aahhh! You have to review soon! That was so good! You can't leave us hanging! I will be looking for your new chapter ASAP! So please post soon, your story is my favorite!
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh. hehheh. hehehehehehhh. :) you've made me so happy i become incoherent. heheh.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! Defintely worth the wait!!
Wow, so Adrian is Kara's guardian angel...what a twist! I hope you will explain what being a guardian angel entails in your upcoming chapters..I mean what does it mean to be a guardian angel to someone? Can a half demon have a guardian angel...and how did Damien know? I'm asking because I'm really intrigued with all your interesting twists and loops and I just want to make sure I understand all the connections....
Favorite line:
"No," I said, looking up at him. His face was flushed, and his blue eyes were hard. "I didn't want to know how that felt. That's why I jumped in front of you."
Faltering, he stared at me, at a loss for words. Oh, damn it. I wrapped both my arms around him and gave him a tight hug that made him wince. "Broken ribs," he whispered, pushing my hands down. He saw the look on my face and cupped my chin in his hand, gently stroking the curve of my jaw with his thumb. "I'll heal," he assured me."
Awww....how romantic...seriously I can't wait to see this romance blossom...I mean I think Kara is in love with Damien but just not yet ready to admit that to herself. LOL. And it's true what Eric said, I think Damien would face the end of the world to protect Kara.
So Damien get's blasted with light...is Adrian dead? Is that why the Archangel is crying? and the fact that he makes an appearance, what does that mean?
I LOVE this story and I can't wait until your next chapter!
Wow, so Adrian is Kara's guardian angel...what a twist! I hope you will explain what being a guardian angel entails in your upcoming chapters..I mean what does it mean to be a guardian angel to someone? Can a half demon have a guardian angel...and how did Damien know? I'm asking because I'm really intrigued with all your interesting twists and loops and I just want to make sure I understand all the connections....
Favorite line:
"No," I said, looking up at him. His face was flushed, and his blue eyes were hard. "I didn't want to know how that felt. That's why I jumped in front of you."
Faltering, he stared at me, at a loss for words. Oh, damn it. I wrapped both my arms around him and gave him a tight hug that made him wince. "Broken ribs," he whispered, pushing my hands down. He saw the look on my face and cupped my chin in his hand, gently stroking the curve of my jaw with his thumb. "I'll heal," he assured me."
Awww....how romantic...seriously I can't wait to see this romance blossom...I mean I think Kara is in love with Damien but just not yet ready to admit that to herself. LOL. And it's true what Eric said, I think Damien would face the end of the world to protect Kara.
So Damien get's blasted with light...is Adrian dead? Is that why the Archangel is crying? and the fact that he makes an appearance, what does that mean?
I LOVE this story and I can't wait until your next chapter!
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... so cool
i didnt think gabriel would be coming so soon does this mean that adrian is dead because gabriel was crying???
i didnt think gabriel would be coming so soon does this mean that adrian is dead because gabriel was crying???
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Plain and simple. You updated, and I'm happy, and no one else is, and one of my best friends moved away today, both of which makes me sad, so thank you. Great chapter! :D Absolutely loved it. I love how you're spelling and grammar are rarely if ever wrong, and how you are able to write such an enthralling story that keeps getting better as it goes.
Please update as soon as you can.
Christi
Please update as soon as you can.
Christi
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. i hope you update soon.
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adrian was brave...and cool... though the whole thing was a bit weird... slighty suspicious of adrian
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hoorray an update.
glad your back. loved the new chapter.
glad your back. loved the new chapter.
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The plot, the characters, the DETAIL. I hope you update soon!