schedule
May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods this is funny! Please keep going and make those chappies longer!
schedule
May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The summary had me interested, but when I clicked on it.. I didn't even both to read. It SOUNDS like a great story, but you need to reformat it before you let someone read it. There needs to be a bunch of grammatical correction, some punctuation, and spelling. Nobody likes reading chatspeak, it's painful to the eyes.
Example, first sentence:
"oh shit late again"......i run as hard as i can trying to get there as soon as possible
"Oh, shit, late again!" I run as hard as I can, trying to get there as soon as possible.
The idea sounded like it had merit, but please fix your story up first! Right now it looks like a very rough draft. I'm sure it'll be better once you work it over a little more! Good luck.
Example, first sentence:
"oh shit late again"......i run as hard as i can trying to get there as soon as possible
"Oh, shit, late again!" I run as hard as I can, trying to get there as soon as possible.
The idea sounded like it had merit, but please fix your story up first! Right now it looks like a very rough draft. I'm sure it'll be better once you work it over a little more! Good luck.