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for Not supposed to: Top Dogs

by teeta

person Kolgrim
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had a good laugh, thank you for all three of you for RP:ing this crazy one shot, I know I'll be grinning madly when ever I remember this reading experience and soon enough I've frighten all my customers away with this mad grin and it's all your fault, lol.
sorry to leave this review short, but, you know i'm busy *grins*
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O lol!!!!!!!! Oh my god! That was sooooo awesome!
'Who's gonna use it?'
'Me.'
Ha! I laughed so hard at this one shot. Ohhhhh. That was great. Uri was really...not Uri though.
Dee
person Miharaz
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow... spastic and kinda really really really scary........ o.o please never include something like that in the real story or i think my brain would explode =P Was still funny though how Uri had them both wrapped around his finger.
person Sekre
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, that had me laughing xD You guys must have interesting roleplays.
person Kasandra
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It was so funny that Rane and Shawn was fighting over Uri. Keep up the great writing. This story makes me kinda hungry. ;)
person Laaerie
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a pleasure to RP! We actually managed to make me NOT study for yet ANOTHER final exam... and make me grin like an idiot all the way through my exam! and BTW I did manage to write my name on the sheet, even though I have no clue of what else was in it! after question 1... I don't really think I had any other imagine in my head but these three silly boys talking about condoms! HUGS!!! Had a great time!!!

Laaerie