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for Not supposed to: Top Dogs

by teeta

schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D: No lemon~!

Still, I'm glad I found this. I am one happy fangirl right now...squeeing so badly. This is just what I was looking for~

Though, it makes it even harder for me to choose which couple I like more; RaneUri or ShawnUri...but, when one can't choose a threesome works best~!

Thanks for the great read and I look forward to the update of Not suppose to~
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xD That was simply hilarious, teeta! Major props for all of the pervy joking. I thought that it was a little bit strange how Uri wasn't completely mooning over Shawn since I've never seen him like that... at all. But then again, I guess that's why this is a "crackfic" huh? :3 -snort- Tartar sauce... riiiiiight. Rane must've been feeling pretty desperate if he was willing to accept having tartar sauce... ahem, right. Great job! I'm off to read the next chapter of Not Supposed To now, kay?
person Dayakara
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rane ... Shawn ... and Uri, plus flavor condoms ... ^_^ A threesome with Rane? I like it. I could just picture Uri with a little smirk on his face as Rane and Shawn are on thier knees in front of him ^O^ Heheee, Priceless
Another wonderful side story to "Not supposed to" (I wish that I could leave a longer one, but the library is closing ^_^)

Dayakara~
person Jenna T.
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! This was way too funny! I think I laughed so hard that I cried in certain parts. Oh God. Perverted Uri is the best. This seems like a deja vu moment. Oh well. Anyways, this was really, really funny.
person Hell
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL
That was really good *laughs*
Oh, the crackness~ Must it live forevah
Loved the last one! Heh, Uri as the seme, or whatever..
Hope you'll continue with these sidestories! Really great written and all *grins*
person tainted_love
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, oh, this one had me laughing! It was like a naughty playground for my perverted little mind! :oD And Uri tasting the condoms was great. Sounds like something he would do!
person miles
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ! Ha ! I love when Uri is "merciless"...
person VicRia
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I couldnt stop laughing! A fight over a popsicle! XDD
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
funny. i like your little oneshots, though i like chapters more! can't wait 'til you post again.
person Spiral
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And in even in your side stories you leave cliffies. Great short though and all the innuendo was killing me. Can wait until you update Not Supposed To! Keep up the good work.

<3 Spiral