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ooo id like to be on the update list plz, my email is htwyford@hotmail.co.uk, thanks

Can I just marry you? That was insanely sexy :P And ooh, this glary guy has me interested - Paul, is it? I think he has a crush on our little Chris, either that or he's out to murder him ;;glances around suspiciously;;. Great chapter!

Yes it did make up for it very much so. That guy is jealous of what's her name, sorry I'm bad with names. Anywh very good love it.

you...are...evill!!!!! aaaah!!! your chapters get better and better hun. i love it. and dont tell me without his glasses chris looks utterly, utterly adorable?? haha.

XP please hurry and write lol. i mean when u have the time XP

Yet another awesome chapter.. Your story is the best thing on this site: it delivers high quality smut with a plot! Glad to see that Joshua's arrogant facade is cracking a little, I can see him starting on a downward spiral of jealousy and paranoia =D, haha. It's nice that the non-sex plot is starting to come into focus again too, it's really interesting and I would definitely read it even if you cut the man-on-man action.

maybe chris should play hard to get with chris. make chris see what hes missin?
the end, was woah. crazy. it just got intense.
what was that look that girl gave him? lol.
anyways, great chapter, cant wait for the next one.

Why am I reviewing this again? Because I got bored and read the whole thing over from start to finish and I've got to tell you, it's the most beautiful thing ever. It's literally my favourite story right now. It's better than the bible. No. It's better than Penthouse letters. No...even better. It's better than the best thing in the universe. That's how good it is. O_o.

And I never really read through your responses to other reviewers but now I'm glad I did because talk of a mystery guy to give Joshua some competition... It sounds interesting. Very interesting. I kind of hope it's Matt. Just because I always liked Matt even though he was barely around. He was nice. And Joshywoshy didn't seem to like him so that made it even better.

I'm in such love with this. Christopher has to be the cutest thing ever. So impulsive and snarky... Joshua is just a dick but I still love him. Maybe because he's as perverted as they come. Or because he's hot. Or both. The plot, which I actually do like, too, is really interesting. I can't wait to see what's going on with all these mysterious emails. Oooo spoookyyyyyy. And now I shall stop rambling.

Looking forward to your next update!

That was the most evil place to end a chapter. Ever. I hope you update soon!

I LOVE this fic. Keep updating!

This story is AMAZING. I just couldn't stop reading it, seriously. And the sex.... -drools- Seriously, some of the best-written smut on this site. Please add me to your update list? -bribes with chocolate-
By the way, I LOVE the fanart for the story. You're a very good artist, as is everyone else who drew fanart for it.