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for Crappy Predicament

by mehmeh

schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should try being a skeleton sometime, its actually quite fun...especially during halloween :D
That aside, another great chapter ;) we see bastard!joshua but also possessive!joshua which is interesting ^^
looking forward to the next update
(i would write more, but i should get back to my essay, procrastination really isn't a good thing for my grades -_-;; even though your story is a good source of procrastination material....)
person Rachel
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
..That... was amazingly hot. I LOVE how Christopher isn't some completely submissive uke. Also, the fact that Joshua would be jealous if Chris found another lover (even if it's only because his "manhood" would be threatened) makes me squee inside. The two seem so perfect for each other, even though they don't get along at all.
I'm very happy to hear that there will be a happy ending, by the way. =D
I seriously think I'm going to need to draw some fanart for this story... don't expect it for a while though, I'm a master at procrastination.

Thank you so much for adding me to the email list. I can't wait for more. ; D
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far. Christopher is my favorite character and it's amusing how he can get himself into different situations with Joshua. my e-mail marsmars_07@hotmail.com can you add me to your update list? can't wait to read more.
person Black Ice
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Maria drives me crazy. Why? Because she's a freakin' idiot. But she's still a good person...
person leah
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't usually bother reading originals, but this is really good. i don't really like how Christopher agrees to degrade himself like that, but the smut's hot. If I were him I'd play hard to get a bit more.
person spex
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter. I just re-read this story for like the hundred time some day ago. So double yay! Awesome chapter it's always so goddamn intense and drags you into the story with a bang! And wooh, reading about him when he's in his school was really interesting, how he was with the other students. It will be so fun reading about how the drama with that guy who "hated" him in school will turn out, well if it's supposed to turn out some way :P
person Kryst Sutures
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always get ridiculously happy when this updates, you have no idea. And it is possible to be that bored, but it's such a good story it's an awesome way to pass the time. Always finding little things I missed and reliving those sexy moments. XD. I am obsessed, damn it.

Moving on...
I always said to myself that I wanted Joshua to cockslap Christopher... And now that he did, I'm thrilled. He's so damn kinky. I LOVE IT.I don't think any of his many fetishes will freak me out. He's too hot and Christopher is too slutty. They just make everything tantalising. Also, possessive Joshua is SO hot. Yum, yum, yum! I ove how hot he is when he's getting off on Chris' whore behaviour. The sex between them is DYNAMITE. And I can't stand Maria. But only because she's not a sexy guy, I'm betting. And she's so... nice. Yuck. XD.
I'm dying to see more so I shall wait patiently. I'm still thinking of this mystery guy...*flails wildly* I wonder if it's that School God kid. Actually, nah. It probably isn't him. I'll stop guessing. And I'll stop talking, too!
person Koira
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am pleased with this update. Very.
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to see that bastard on his knees for Chris. I will laugh and throw handfuls of lemon jello at him!

Well-written and worth the wait.

KD
person stve3
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody brilliant chapter! It's amazing how much you can learn from a supposed "sex scene". It was of course very hot (especially Joshua's possessiveness and Chris's taunting of him :), but beyond it, it showed us a lot more of Chris's affect on Joshua and their relationship dynamic.

I like Maria and it's very sweet how she cares about Chris's future. I of course, believe she very much does have a crush on Chris and wonder if perhaps so does a certain high school jock-bully? We'll we be seeing more of him?

Loved the ending! Chris is sure in a huge mess-Way larger than what I expected! question is, what is he now expected to do with this information...

Bit sad that it'll take longer for next chapter but very understood! May I ask what you are studying? Anyway, good luck with your exams!