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for Crappy Predicament

by mehmeh

person Mia
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey.
In your fanart (site posted on chapter 13), there's a woman in the background, is that the woman who gave Joshua the necklace? Since her hand seems to be underneath the necklace on his wrist?

xx
person AJ
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi :)

I just love your story! your characters are so in depth...i just love Joshua, he's so mean to poor Christopher
and yet the poor guy keeps going back for more! i also really enjoy your style of writing, you make the works
flow effortlesly and I can't wait for you to update more chapters.

Please, please can you send me an email when you update? :)
my email address is broken_dwn_angel@hotmail.co.uk

AJ
person Laie
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I can't believe I missed this little jem for so long... I have fallen in love with your fic! I wanna know who sends those mysterious messages to Chris; I think it's a man even though emoticons are usually used by women... And I think Eric is not what he seems, Chris shouldn't go near him...

I want to get mailed when you update! (if it's possible, of course). My email is laie_himura_de_fanel@msn.com!
person dutsada
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First, thanks for this update!... made my day really.... Its nice to see that Joshua gets a little possessive of Chris. Moreover admits, albeit crudely, that Chris is attractive! Wonder what other ideas you got up in your sleeves eh?
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story to pieces, even if I haven't reviewed in a while. It is, hands down, my favorite fic on this site. Joshua is wonderful. I love how we are gradually learning more and more about him... He's like a puzzle made from incredibly sexy pieces. Heheh.

Keep up the fabulous work.
person Koira
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't have anything to say that I (or someone else) haven't said before, but I figured leaving a review might be nice anyway. So just imagine this saying "ur awesom" or "looooveeee it" or some other random crap. Whatever you want a reviewer to praise, I'd probably praise it.
Oh, and I'm flattered you called me Master. I wonder if I resemble Joshua in some way, then.
person l.fire
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
who wants to watch two males walking hand to hand,smiling while their puppy is following behind?
yuck!
boring!
i'll paint those puffy pink hearts around them in black!
*evil laugh*

i like things the way they are now.
i do not like romance anyway.

that's why i adore this story.
now make chris suffer.
pleasure-pain games are the best.
*evil laugh*

joshua is so fun to be around.
it is so, it is so.
*silly laughter*
person kitty08
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow I love the story!!! please please update soon!!!
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved that you showed some jealousy in joshua... oh please tell me he's gonna her about maria as well, and maybe crash the party or something, that'd be soooo awesome ;) loved the entire chapter, as usual XD
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ZoMGo! I missed two chapters I think!! So sorry! I am a horrible reviewer XD Anyway :) I loved these last two chapters! I was ready to kick Joshua's arse though, he can be such a dick XD BUT Chris was really cool these last two chapters :) I mean he didn't do anything special really but it really showed his obsession with Joshua, even more than before. I was ready to break out the hand grenade and shove it up Joshua's arse when he hit Chris during the last chapter, but then I laughed when even He was surprised that Chris was acting like that XD I absolutely love your story! I can't wait for more from you, this is definitely one of my favorite stories ever!!!
Until then,
Jades
*I'll probably end up re-reading this latest chapter and then reviewing again because it's just so amazing :)*