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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've really gotten into this story and I do hope you will continue it. It would be a shame for this one to linger on unfinished.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update!!!! :D
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! just finished ur 15 chapter in a row! - so this comment a bit long -
AMAZING fabulous...my friend recommend it to me (the one who creates fanart). And i just love it. PLease update sooner. Personally, i would like the angsty thicker than now; cause u see, Chris once thinking of suicide (actually almost died) and i think there must be something desperate enough which made him so. And i saw from ur chapters, his angst so far like teenager, not really like suicidal teenager ( it's just my opinion though). Like, u made small lump on my chest when reading ur story, and then vanish...not very very angsty that makes huge lump on the chest. Anyway..if it's not yet...then i think i'll need to wait. And if u're not plannin that deep angsty, i think there should be somethin that alter his personality from suicidal to rude like now (like turning point??). I dunno...it's just my opinion..
And i really really love how Chris snap sometimes...it's so spontaneous and funny! Great character anyway...
I still curious about their past...and i kinda wanna see Josh panicked of losing(or almost) Chris someday; damn, he's really rude! He's goin to regret how he act around Chris....he's really goin to regret it badddddly (just have feelin )...
Anyway...i kinda presumptuous here since i only read Chris point of view...i really curious about Josh point of view. And maybe he's not as rude as u show us in these past few chapters.
AMAZING fabulous...my friend recommend it to me (the one who creates fanart). And i just love it. PLease update sooner. Personally, i would like the angsty thicker than now; cause u see, Chris once thinking of suicide (actually almost died) and i think there must be something desperate enough which made him so. And i saw from ur chapters, his angst so far like teenager, not really like suicidal teenager ( it's just my opinion though). Like, u made small lump on my chest when reading ur story, and then vanish...not very very angsty that makes huge lump on the chest. Anyway..if it's not yet...then i think i'll need to wait. And if u're not plannin that deep angsty, i think there should be somethin that alter his personality from suicidal to rude like now (like turning point??). I dunno...it's just my opinion..
And i really really love how Chris snap sometimes...it's so spontaneous and funny! Great character anyway...
I still curious about their past...and i kinda wanna see Josh panicked of losing(or almost) Chris someday; damn, he's really rude! He's goin to regret how he act around Chris....he's really goin to regret it badddddly (just have feelin )...
Anyway...i kinda presumptuous here since i only read Chris point of view...i really curious about Josh point of view. And maybe he's not as rude as u show us in these past few chapters.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi there, just read the first 7 chps your fic, and can't hold myself longer to review...
Firstly...LOVE LOVE LOVE IT XD...I enjoy your plot and storyline,the development of your character and all those suppressed sexual tension is delicious...
Chris really crack me up and I'm glad this mission (chp7) somewhat sizing him to his ground...
I kind of 'get' Chris in characterization and attitude, but I have yet figure Joshua out...maybe i'll learn about him in the next chapters...
Anyway, don't degrade your plot, so far, it's amazing, and i believe it will always be. thank you for sharing this.
Firstly...LOVE LOVE LOVE IT XD...I enjoy your plot and storyline,the development of your character and all those suppressed sexual tension is delicious...
Chris really crack me up and I'm glad this mission (chp7) somewhat sizing him to his ground...
I kind of 'get' Chris in characterization and attitude, but I have yet figure Joshua out...maybe i'll learn about him in the next chapters...
Anyway, don't degrade your plot, so far, it's amazing, and i believe it will always be. thank you for sharing this.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
me again, on chp 13...aargh, love it >.<...I love the pushing and pulling game between the two. and Chris, oh dear, there are times when he crack me up and times when I'm tempted to yell 'put a brake on that mouth already!' but I'm rooting for him mainly...yaay, go chris and his masochoistic tendency XD...
regarding the anonymous mail, please don't tell me that the sender is Pierre *brrr* with the smiley and funny wording (didn't know why, but as I read the mail, Pierre flashed in my head...and it's traumatic)
another great chapter and yummy sex scene b( > v < )d
regarding the anonymous mail, please don't tell me that the sender is Pierre *brrr* with the smiley and funny wording (didn't know why, but as I read the mail, Pierre flashed in my head...and it's traumatic)
another great chapter and yummy sex scene b( > v < )d
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mein gott! This is so brilliant!
Best line: "He was a monster of a human being, built like a brick shithouse and I kid ye not, could have been the combined lovechild of Arnold Schwarzenegger and Dolph Lundgren."
I nearly shit a break laughing so hard. NO ONE knows who Dolph Lundgren is these days! Nobody! I just like died. Died, I tell you. It was pretty much just like... >< Happiness.
Sigh. Looking forward to sooo much more. I'm probably going to stay up until the wee hours reading this... :P Forget homework!
Best line: "He was a monster of a human being, built like a brick shithouse and I kid ye not, could have been the combined lovechild of Arnold Schwarzenegger and Dolph Lundgren."
I nearly shit a break laughing so hard. NO ONE knows who Dolph Lundgren is these days! Nobody! I just like died. Died, I tell you. It was pretty much just like... >< Happiness.
Sigh. Looking forward to sooo much more. I'm probably going to stay up until the wee hours reading this... :P Forget homework!
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ack! You probably get this a lot but I absolutely ADORE your story. I'm hooked! I want-- no, I NEED more! I was wondering if you could add me to your mailing list for when you update? My e-mail is <>. I've probably read over the entire thing twice now, just burning for the next one; the chemistry between your two characters is incredible and I hope you don't get bored of writing about them anytime soon. They are positively drool-worthy, and the stinging sarcasm/wit has me squealing each time the two of them get into a fight!.. that leads to sex! Aaahh, I love it! Okay, but enough fangirl-squealing, sorry, no need to bother you even more on your probably busy life. Just letting you know that you've got another loyal fan pathetically sitting at the edge of her seat, barely holding on, waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
P.S. .. Oh god, when will the next update be?! I'm having serious Joshua-Christopher withdrawals! ... -twitch-
P.S. .. Oh god, when will the next update be?! I'm having serious Joshua-Christopher withdrawals! ... -twitch-
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Add me to the mailin' list! Email is kiyoai@hotmail.com
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing... just....whoa. I just finished chapter 6, and the entire story has been wonderfully refreshing so far. I really needed something uplifting, so thank you for writing. Chris is very endearing, and your style of writing is very inspirational. I literally laughed out loud at the "Joshua made me feel like Sailor Moon" part, and I'm absolutely hooked. I'm not finished, but you definitely have another fan and reader. Keep up the amazin' writing!