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Is this a dead story? Please let me know because it's soul destroying checking for updates every single day like a sad and desperate person. It's been over a year now :/ even if you don't update, could you at least let me know if the updates have come to an end? Otherwise I'll just be checking in vain forever.

Oooh pplease pleaasee continue this story T__T
or atleast tell us what you're planning T____________________T
pleasssseee I love this story soooo much I really hope you will update this soon!

Ah...WIP's always distress me, and I noticed before I started reading this that it hadn't been updated in a while.
Nevertheless, the story is really great--I really like Chris. Also, I laughed so freaking hard at the bit with the cellphone ringtone.
Fantastic.

Hopefully you'll update...eventually?

Oh! And before I forget, in one chapter Chris comment on Joshua pronouncing "Route" the American way?
Didn't know there was difference.
Does that mean Joshua said it like "Rowt" or "Root"?
Because I'm American and at least where I live it's pronounced like "Root".
I do, however, say the word "Router" like "Rowter"...

here I am again *sigh*
Please, please, please tell me that you haven't quit on this story!
This story is so good and I hope you won't quit it! please just inform us why you haven't updated yet...
I love this story, it's sad if this has been abandoned...
Please update soon! and thank you for this great and amazing story T_T

I don't mind if you respnd to my review or not, but I just wanted to tell you that after reading your work in progress I was hooked like fish. I've only been reading fanfiction since june of '09 and after reading romance novel from my teens this is really a pleasant surprize. I was at first a little shocked by the really hot scenes, but mostly enjoy the stories. I think women are more reseptive to the written word for mind stimulation than the men are, but I could be wrong. Your main characters are both flawed, but they both are very sure of what they want and the verbalize it very strongly. They seem to be contradicting themselves though. Chris is very cocky and a smartmouth, but down deep inside all he wants is for someone to love him inspight of his rude arrogant way. Joshua is impassive and aggressive and dominant who seems to not care for Chris at all, but then he doesn't want anyone near Chris even after he told him to find someone else earlier. I cringe everytime they insult each other, but it's kind of funny. I don't want them to ever get all boring and supermushy with each other, but I wouldn't mind if they told each other that they are addicted to each other and couldn't see letting the other person go because they love them, in their screwed up kinky way. Ha Ha I love this hole Mission Impossible theme, because it would be a kids wet dream to be involved in something like that. While reading the story I was putting all possible combinations, and I really don't know who I would like Chris to have as another lover, but I think it's cruel if his only love is one that abuses him constantly. He'll never know gentle love, which can be so wonderful too. What if something happens to Joshua, and he dies (God Forbid). Chris will forever be looking for someone to smack him around and shove deodarant cans up his bum, instead of looking for a normal relationship, not that their relationship is't normal. Anyways keep on keeping on, your a sensational writer (heehee I said sensational). If you don't object I would like to read some of your other stories. Hope they are just as good!! Your Fanple

Just found this story, and I just realized that it's been over a year since you updated. I hope you plan on continuing this soon, becuase its amazing. I haven't read anything else like it before, and There are too many unanswered questions to just let it go as it is~~

Allanasha Ke Kiri

Very interesting story, I can't stop reading till the last chapter. Thank you. Hope you update soon.

Omg, you're killing me with your non-updating-- er... haha. I hope life's not treating you too badly.

Dammit please don't tell me you've quitted this fic.....when was this fic updated last? T_______T
please update soon! this fic is sooo worth continuing plllllllllllllllllleasse ooooh pleassssse update soooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok i am absoultly in love with this story i realy like josh's charicter too any way email me when you up date again please my adress is kannacho@hotmail.com