rate_review Reviews

Damn, was casually browsing the site this evening when I came across your story. I was pleasantly surprised to say the least. It's been hard to find good reading material lately, but these first three chapters have proven otherwise. Now I'm hooked. ;)

The plot line is quite unique and that's refreshing to see. The characters are great of course; I have a soft spot for attractive, sarcastic, sexually-frustrated men. The sexual tension hasn't quite arrisen yet, but I'm sure it'll come around sooner or later. Really do love how Josh and Chris "hate" eachother at the moment, makes for some good character development and hot smut scenes down the road.

Also love the undertones of humor in the story; well at least I found many things funny. Most of Chris's thoughts have me chuckling, the kid is smart, but those teen hormones sure love to show at times. Otto is great, I kept trying to say all his accented lines out loud. And there's just something about Pierre that makes me want 'lol' greatly...hm... just as an afterthought, do you think he'll ever be involved in any of Chris's "training"? *insert pervy grin here*

Hehe, well it's late and I need to hit the sack, but I applaud you on your great story so far and encourage you to keep working on it. Would really like to see more. Mm, I sense Josh giving Chris a spanking somewhere in the near future! Har har.

Okay, okay I'm leaving. >X)

I like you story a lot. Amusing. He he.

these guys are really great together!!! I hope the physical training won´t kill our student! First I thougtht the story about agents and so on will be too unrealistic/boring but right now I´m looking forward to it! You have a new fan...so please update fast!

Omigosh~ I like it! very very much!

You can go on without a beta you know ahaha.
And I personality think you don't need any criticisms of any sort, you know what you're doing. You're really a good writer. You know when and where to pause, to stop, to start something.

Love the sarcastic and smart witty comments!
Chris is adorably bratty and awesome. :D

I enjoyed reading it <3 I wonder what happens next *wink wink*

This is really interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.

You know, you could actually turn this in to a book the plot is that good. At least, it's really amazing so far. I'd reallyyyy love it if you updated sooner. Haha, so yeah I like this story. A lot.

Mmmm, interesting. Count me intrigued. The way you're writing this is kind of a neat twist on an old storyline--I LOVE the fact that the building is so anti-James Bond. And Chris really is an irritating little brat, who is amazingly immature for his IQ level. That said, I also adore him: his snarky mental monologues are priceless. He's hilarious, and I can't wait to see his reaction when he figures out that he is actually strongly attracted to Joshua. Mwahahaha. Not that I can blame him--that man is HOT. (We're all suckers for the dangerous, bad-boy, type, aren't we?)
And yeah, feel free to add in all the sweaty man-sex your illicit little heart desires! There will be absolutely NO complaints from this quarter! In fact, I will probably melt into a happy little puddle of goo. So please, put me out of my misery and review soon, will you?

Ohhh. Intrigue. Can't wait for more. This is le good!

this actually sounds really interesting!=D please update soon

CHAPTER 2
Whoa, AmuseMe,
What a good start! Nice two chapters, yeah, I liked them:)