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I love your story. its is really original and entertaining. keep t up!

*Shivers* Absolutly loved it. Can't wait for more, I so want Josh to drive Chris crazy, maybe a litle sexual teasing is in order on their mission? That would be so worth it. I would just die to see Chris all hot, and horny, and with noting that he can do about it. And josh just pushing him over the edge with that hot ass deadly attitude. I think Chris likes dangerous things to play with in bed, and he should be played with by a very dagerous, and hot blue-eyed man. Keep goin' girl, I'm still a happily content reader, and at your very feet beging for more tourcher! Ja-ne.

well obviously the task will prove harder for Chris than he thinks because he is indeed a muscleless wanker but still I hope Chris doesn't fall completely head over heals for Josh with some stupid father/mentor complex. I don't like Josh all that much which means I like him very little. I hope Chris does get the upper hand a bit because no matter what he was hacking into he is in a truly suck ass position and I mean that litterally and figuratively. And I would rather not need to. Almost anyone in that position no matter how comfy they get would love to eventaully stick it to the creeps who kidnapped/blackmailed them into doing shit. And those who can't (like us readers) would love to read about someone actually doing it.

Of course it would be cool if Chris got the upper hand but that is doubtful as his intelligence doesn't go further than a computer screen. I am just hoping Chirs is going to be more than some dripping uke in this fic. He seems to be on a dissent into blubbery and with Josh ever the seriously goss kind of character it makes me want to hack into one of the characters with an axe or something.

so yeah i like the fic.

I love the chapt! Gosh things are like getting hot between them... Especially the part where Joshue was teaching Chris on the Gun thing... Just in case you got to the e-mail i sent ya, ignore that ha ha... apparently I didnt read the next couple line where you explained to me Chris's Eye and Hair colour... I just saw it... *Blush*.. I am such an idiot... However.. I'd like to ask for your permission to allow me to TRY to draw up a pic of everyone's fav main characters.. Haha.. Bad at drawing guys..No i am just bad at drawing period but I wanna give it a shot can I?

OH I must say I love your story, the characters make me laugh and the plot is just AMAZING! I can't wait for the next chapter.

At a first glance this story wasn't that inviting, but when I actually bothered to sit down and read every friggin' line, I was pleasantly surprised.

The story is pushing the limits of reality and it's great. Fantastic, actually. And the character's - I love 'em. They're not just men in black suits running around the world doing secret agent stuff because they're like OMG spies/etc but they actually have personalities and different backgrounds. Which makes me go YAY!
I do hope Chris would get on top of the things once in a while - he has an exceptionally IQ after all, right? :D But yeah... He's too busy pissing off a certain someone to actually stop and think about the consequenses.

... ... ...He's so asking for it, isn't he? (I have this unpleasant gut feeling that tells me he's gonna get himself raped. *sigh*)

So; it's a great story, it has great characters in it and it's a fun read. Thank you so much for writing.

Another great chapter. =) I like how their relationship is developing. I can't wait for next because I'd like to see the outcome of them being on their first mission together.

I thought that you already wrote about that cross....and bingo as he saw a nice foto of his student and thinks about sex, he holds the cross (prologue, had to go back and read it again).......interesting so he would like to but his past....???.....
Well I´m waiting for the next update! It gets better and better!

Great story!!!! keep going on like that, everything starts to be more complex(characters and story line), it gets better and better sooooooo......
I want more........please.....!!!!! :)

You know, I love your story man... seriously its got everything in one... Action, Humour at the right places, sarcasm that got me laughing none stop and romance that is sure to come in the upcoming chapters... I am gonna say it again I love it... LOL...

By the way correct me if i'm wrong but I think Chris's physical appearance was not revealed entirely huh? I just know he's got longish kinda hair maybe round the shoulders in messy waves and a slightly feminine touch to his feature like the lips and slim chin but I dunno what his hair colour or his eye colour are.. I went through the story twice... found nuthin though... or is it to be mentioned soon?

Excited for the next chapter by the way... *bounce bounce*